Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jan 25, 2009.
wow. the ultimate question. mmhhh
if only all could see the power of the mind that we could use to elevate. not everything is always literal. but not everyone has the vision.
what would supstitute for faith and hope? if there wasn't thee?? imagine the world after such.....
thank you for your post.
man this one touch home and at heart i feel ya and know well about the walls
of today's world , question we ask self as we onlook at where we are.....tyte write
I don't think that god is doing it just for the hell of it I know there is a purpose or els Im serving the wrong god but i think all of us has asked that question as some point i am also a victim of no knowing the purpose of my suffering
it's titles like this that peak my curiosity...
and u laid some serious thoughts down...
i feel u....
life can be in yo face like mace sometimes...
and still i say what doesn't kill u makes u stronger...
4 what it's worth....
powerful scribe sir...
So'ja, I feel it important to express my love and RESPECT for what you've laid down here.
WORK baby, WORK OUT!
smh There's even a price to pay to die.
I don't know why, but this piece just pissed me off
Uh huh? I guess its all this madness!
Tyte drop! ^5 to the 10th power!
thank you kind poet you are life as i see it
daroc: no not everyone has the vision, that is my contention there should not be a reason too still be "searching" in this day and time, superstitions
still have strangle hold on our conscious
you make my point without even realizing it, there would be no
need for "faith and hope" if we were living by spiritual divinity using the universe in a way much like you use an iron to iron your clothes, i don't know if i'm making my point clear but open up let the light come thru, not everyone life on earth or who has ever lived had always seen or had it the best, if that was the case we wouldn't have thing called suicide, but my point is if you're born we see you get the most out of your one chance at life, but not at the expense of others which is the case now, we have the mental ability to override such speciousness
$$$RICH$$$: - thank you for seeing the limit because there is one, one that we placed on ourselves peace poet
you question show me you understand deep within your core what i speak, because i'm speaking life and you hear me, the problem is our programming gets in the way of "seeing" but you can feel and what is the purpose of your suffering and or anyone suffering? great question
what we value has to change because the real "change" is at our crest
i know what you mean, i'm thinking of an african child looking for food infested with flies and their arms blown off yea there'll be stronger
so to speak but at what cost?
1poet: thanks for the love i forgot to put "lol" at the end of my poem
i'm not mad i'm disappointed in our level of thought so finite and fixated
on the nonsense of course but eating and sleeping is not nonsense, it's the nonsense one has to go thru to live in EURO-PERVERT-MANIA
PurpleMOONS: paying to live paying to die, i see i'm not crazy, yes isn't there something wrong with this concept? i reached my point i can't turn back now
i'm tired of being suckered and i hope your too, but understand change will not come easy and it WILL be ugly but think of it like this
crack an egg open and it looks all nasty but nuture that same egg
and a beautiful baby chick comes out!
Are our experiences in this life supposed to drain us, sap us of all energy, or should our experiences leave us feeling renewed, with added knowledge from lessons learned? This piece makes me ask even more questions, which I do appreciate, more than you know. As usual, I respect your pen.
DSS, THIS WAS CONTEMPLATIVE FOR ME. I FEEL THAT WE HAVE ALL CHOSEN THIS LIFE BEFORE WE GOT HERE. THIS ONE THAT YOU HAVE CHOSEN ARE LESSONS TO BE LEARNED AND/OR TO TEACH OTHERS. IT IS IN THE POETRY YOU ARE ABLE TO REACH OTHERS... THIS WAS REALLY NICE, INTROSPECTIVE AT IT'S BEST.
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