Black Poetry : How?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Aug 13, 2013.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is it not the fault of nature
    Turning me into something
    Having to adapt to her sun
    From the heart of day
    Sorry was not then when scientist contended
    The truth they say was told
    Melanin is a protectent of the skin
    Someone knowing what was kneaded
    To have survival being as green as before
    Now a new reason why nature contends
    Atmospheric pressure pushing a whole
    New thing of why black
    Could be the real beginnings
    As of today as we've lost touch of her original
    Sun of Life.
     
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    Candee,
    that angry sun
    has begun to revolt.
    We should take notice.

    Truly Love this.
     
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    Again and again
    I watch and marvel
    Sister Poet Candeesweet
    at the uniqueness
    and fresh breaths of your work
    please don't let the silence mislead you
    your words are admired and adored

    (smile)
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so glad you like this.
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We do feed off of one anothers instincts. About each other too.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully scripted and nitch deep one must see within the vast of the shine to know it's glow
    love this piece sis
     
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    Thank You $$Rich$$