Black Poetry : How

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Mar 9, 2006.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How did you get up this mourning walk to
    The mirror and look at the reflection and not feel in the least
    Bit cold or like you were wrong
    How could you destroy someone and
    Not care how bad it hurt them
    How
    How can you sleep at night or look at someone you love if You cause so much pain
    How you ask
    I get up and think about all the things I've evr felt that caused pain
    And I return the favor to the world
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    take heart forth thy action and feel the rain
    anothers pain ...look deeper
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some take their angst and try to spread it around like seeds, but the only thing that grows from that is more pain. Thought provoking piece, so nice to read you again poet.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *** THIS WAS DEEP!
    GREAT WRITE!
     
  5. Queen Of Poetry

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    So true and so real
    I was really loving this piece poet
    Much Love
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!
    That is so deep.
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya on this poet. yes some truth spoken here.
     
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    niceness. putting u on my "one's to watch" list.