Black Poetry : How You Say My Name

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jan 30, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You make me weak
    While I'm being strong
    You say my name
    You drive me insane
    How you sound
    Extending that one syllable
    At just the right time
    When the rush is incredible
    You say it soft
    Then louder and louder
    You say my name
    Again and again
    Making me respond
    To the mesage you send
    You say my name
    You call me
    Direct me
    My name moves through your sweet, wet lips
    Setting the rules
    For our passionate game
    You make me do things
    When you say my name

    BE
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    I Love It Heartbeat!!!

    :)

    Welcome Welcome Welcome !!!!
    Oh Boy Oh Boy Oh Boy !!!

    Thank you for sharing with me!
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...hmmm

    ...just to know that my voice
    could make a man weak...

    yesss...nice flow BE!
     
  4. Juicylv4u2

    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmm...call my name , call my name
    I like that flow BE :)

    1Love,
    Juice
     
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    Sup Heartbeat!!! Man this is tight........now i know its about to be on up in here.......
     
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    BBRRRUUUCCEEE!!!!!

    beautiful....

    A
     
  7. bassaman

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    mmmmm

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!

    niiiiiiiiccccccccce flow, BE.


    ciao
     
  8. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmmmm

    I like this one!!!;)
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is rawfully tight. Beautiful poem...the flow is fast and smooth...I like very much...yes, yes, yes!
     
  10. jazzybelle

    jazzybelle Member MEMBER

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    this spoke to me. love it when a man can express himself so freely. she must be special
     
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