Black Poetry : how will you be? (haiku)

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  1. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (for those confused by their senses, passions, and every other **** thing)


    when s/he comes back home
    will s/he find someone confused?
    or your mind made up?


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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This haiku will make ya' ponder..... I like it! Thanks.


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!!

    dis make u wonder.......:confused:
     
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    **** T. nice - thought provoking.

    Temporary Insanity

    was it not the confusion that sent s/he away?
    was it not the misunderstanding of befuddled minds?
    was it not the lack of communication that drove s/he away from home?

    shall s/he return? can s/he come home?
    home? house of two confused minds?
    or home of two understanding heart?
    home? or house? confused? discombobulate? discomfited?
    bewildered? beguiled? befuddled?
    can "the leaver" or "the left behind" find peace and tranquillity of mind within self?

    these question(s) remain to be answered.
     
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    love it!
    makes ya look
    inside...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***hmmm pondering my answer***


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    Hey...I liked this. Thought I'd dig it back up.
     
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    yes, this has depth of meaning.... thanks for bringing it back Joyce.

    thanks for making me "come again", T. :heart:

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