Black Poetry : How We Achieve "Symbiosis", Cuz The Sex Is Already Good....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Nov 13, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...ramblings from the hope chest...


    there is something more
    that
    we bring to this

    when we can disrobe
    and vibe
    without the sexing

    there is nothing more satisfying
    than stripping away
    tired facades and breaking down
    old barriers, just through
    conversation….

    because we have this
    trust
    …. we can let loose
    the demons and
    have confidence the
    other can/will
    calm the screaming inside
    our minds….
    by speaking the hardest words
    of truth

    the ******** has no place....

    and

    we can touch
    feel, hold,
    encourage &
    arouse our hearts'
    desires to fulfill
    dreams we've put aside

    ....in opening the doorway
    to deeper understanding
    we take each other’s
    hand while we both
    search for the light

    but only with honesty
    will we face

    who we
    are (and who
    we ain't)
    in the stark light
    of reality

    confirming
    why
    it is so
    important

    to get naked
    before each other

    be/coming ever closer
    ...complete,

    and necessary


    Alyce (c) 2001

    From: "The Woman In My Attic"
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truth lives in the attic...thank you for letting us in.

    BE
     
  3. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    only you

    can tell us how it should be done, the way you be telling us....(after we get that orgasm thang down, of course!) Naw, just playin...

    Truly, Ms. A, this is the beauty that a man and a woman CAN be. And sadly, it's really the level that we seldom reach...together.

    There is much truth in that attic. How do you know so much ****?

    :D

    J
     
  4. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are

    a very wise soul. Since forever.

    Teach us.

    BRB
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this Woman in the Attic!

    Wonderfully done as always!
    I really felt this one, check out
    Touching when you get a chance!!!!
    In da archives somewhere
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what you speak of

    is that beautiful plateau where we find that eternal love...the everlasting kind of love that may happen once in a lifetime, if we are so so lucky....

    the true meaning of having a soulmate.....

    beautiful words...

    K
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    ahhhh to be able to be naked in front of the one you love all ******** aside. To have them tell you it's all right if you mess up, they still got yo naked back...... tell that woman in yo attic hey









    One
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    Often sex can propel a person's mind into cloud 9, causing difficulty discovering the realness of who we are until the fantasy ends and you're dropped back into reality. Wonderful to love in the raw.
    I like this lady who resides in your attic.

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  9. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow........Alyce

    So expertly said....
    this is truth
    the whole truth
    and nothin but the truth
    thanks for sharing..


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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