Black Poetry : How to Love you......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by info-moetry, Jul 30, 2008.

  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    Such a beautiful rose
    From your style
    To your pose
    From the stem to the petals
    From your frown to your smile
    Your gorgeous body should be protected
    & like Obama, I promise change if I get elected
    A Goddess and God should never be disconnected
    He don't understand you
    As a matter of fact I think he fears you
    This is why he's watchin' from afar
    To see if anyone is near you
    His low self esteem
    Or his guilt plays a part
    Neither of those burdens should be placed on your shoulders
    Because you're such a beautiful work of art
    Picasso couldn't paint a picture
    That turned out like you
    Some weak brothers darken your vision
    But I won't let him take the light out of you
    You’re supposed to shine
    Like the sun in the day time
    Or the moon at night
    During the solstice, they even shine at the same time
    You see you were givin’ the same mind
    As the ancient Queens of Egypt
    But every brother can't recognize that
    Because only a king can see it....................

    Sincere Allah*7 © 2008
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great piece poet ...^5
     
  3. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this is so precious, sweet and endearing. I think I want to be loved like this. Excellent expression poet
     
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    Sassysammy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    info, great flow I always feel your drops
    captured me from the opening lines to the end
    flow on bro.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely done and well expressed
     
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    Loving in a way that only a king can understand, this was exquisite poet.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sign me up for this i love this write poet........:kiss1::welldone:
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    I CAN SEE

    I CAN SEE


    FEELING THE GOD
     
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    Loved the work of art man, you ended that with the perfect conclusion, only a king can see it
     
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    info:
    Absolutely, Positively, Beautiful.....



    Much Luv
     
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