Black Poetry : How to eat a Sista!

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You throw her on the counter
    Peel away all the obstructions of her outer skin
    The silk blouse, the blue jeans, bra, and satin black panties
    Letting them float to the kitchen floor as if they were plucked feathers
    Then carefully marinade her with the sweaty salts of your fingertips
    Afterwards grab her tightly until she becomes moist, tender
    Next rub her down, with all 100% vegetable oil
    Until her skin is fresh, glistening naked
    Once you’ve finished
    Take care placing her slippery body onto the hot skillet
    Now grill her,
    Turn her right side up, left side right inside out and upside down,
    Until her skin teems golden brown.
    Wait a moment.
    Let your heat invade every inch of her flesh.
    Let it run through every blood vessel,
    Each artery, vein, capillary, and nerve ending.
    Till the heat reactions make her raw meats scream “ssssssssssss.”
    Test her temperature now with your tongue.
    If your lips burn, she’s ready!
    Pick her up now.
    Carefully place her on your finest China.
    Pour yourself a glass of white wine along with a tossed salad to compliment her rare delicacy.
    Now forget all you’ve ever been taught about dinner etiquette,
    Return to your most primal instincts.
    Using only your bare hands
    Rip her apart,
    Breast by breast, leg by leg.
    Till at last you’ve devoured her darkest meat.
    When she’s gone,
    Finally, leaving you with nothing but bone,
    Retrieve a zip lock back to preserve her leftovers
    Her heart, soul, eyes, and the rhines on her mind.
    The most beautiful parts you chose not to eat.
    You bag those up.
    Place them on the top most rack of your refrigerator,
    So you can open it daily and,
    Savor her memory for days to come.
     
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    Tha-Emissary ... oh my ... Welcome Welcome Welcome !!!! ... :wave:

    * gulp *

    uhhhhhhh ... oh my oh my oh my ... i'm just wondering ... as i read this peace ...

    uhhhhhhh ... is this legal in Alabama ??!!!! ... i mean ... i'm jes' say'n ...

    oh my !!!! :)

    Whew !!!!

    Wait ... let me go back and read it again ... 'cause i know there's got ta be sump'n illegal in this peace!

    You know what else ... for such an erotic, hot, appetite inducing peace of poetry ...

    there is not one word that is astericked out ... you know ... the ********'s ...

    BRAVO !!!!!! :toast:

    Thanks for joining us and sharing your wonderful work!

    Much Love and Peace.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Id have to agree with destee. Welcom brotha.. you certainly know how to gather a crowd.. :angel1: Let me know when you are teaching this course :cake: .. id gladly assist u in the kitchen.. lol.. :chef:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoaaaaaaaaa...
    This had a nice, different, wild...yet exotic twist to it :wink: ...and needless to say, I'm speechless...*mouth wide open* ...I mean..whew, uhmmm I use to use a old saying: "eat me raw" ..(*in my own exotic way*) ...but I never dreamed of being cooked, ...very spicy.
    thanks for the smile, I enjoyed reading this piece poet...and welcome home
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You had me going with this one. But I must say it turned out better than I expected it was very beautiful. The detail was great I look forward to more from you.
     
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    dang that was freaky
    I mean real freaky
    that right there was tha :bomb: :bomb::bomb::bomb::bomb:
    do ya thang baby
    cause you know you doin it good
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang, that was some Jeffrey Dahmer type stuff. Interesting though.
     
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    Great flow

    That is a hot flow. I liked it very much.
    I really like how you closed it...

    " The most beautiful parts you chose not to eat.
    You bag those up.
    Place them on the top most rack of your refrigerator,
    So you can open it daily and,
    Savor her memory for days to come. "
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all the family @ destee for the great abundance of feedback on this piece. I truly appreciate all of your words of encouragement and as they say keep on flowin til the pen runs dry! Thanks again for all the luv.
    T.E.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heatwave , red hot and devine .....the house in flames here
     
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