Black Poetry : How pimp defeats pimp ( A tribute to the pimp in Alpha male's HOW PIMP DEFEATS WHORE)

[blakverb]

Brother grew up on Ron O' Neal pimp skits
Superfly mind enslaved mental trips
practicing how to walk and talk like a cold muthaphhuka
bubbleeye cadillac soul sold brotha
on the screen of humanity that ni...g...guhs heart didn't register a blip

See, smooth words that stalked the weak minded
had him singing the blues while walking the street blinded,
by his own bull sh...yt...
tricked himself into thinking he wore the cloak in the ghetto pulpit
he pimped strutted sideways not cause he's cool/ cause pimps are
spineless

preying and praying to get a woman who has no sense of self
to spread her legs and let jonas-thons put their trophy on her private shelf
...that coward ni...g...gu...h did it for the money
an honorable livin' he could have given himself was to da...m..n funny
just cause that negro got 30 percent he thought he had real wealth

life so trifling he practiced his "pimp slaps" and pimp speak
"b!...tch betta have my money" when she sit in this car after her feets hit them streets
in the back of his mind that negro was scared
he knew that if those word whipped women really understood, really cared
they could cut his @ss from ear to ear deep into the white meat

so pimp defeats pimp by being to da...m...n arrogant
straight up stupid negro thinking he heaven sent
holding a hand held high ready to strike like he's the lord
oblivious to the fact that his existence is abhorred

so when he sleeps and has his head turned
those hoes will get tired of walking...pull out their roscoes
and make the pimps flesh burn.

(c)2004 blakverb

Yo...Alpha...this ain't even me...but thanks for the (a)muse.

 

[$$RICH$$]

dis was awesome outstanding bounce
brutha ya craft and the way u lay it
takes a mind in deep love it love it love it !!!!!!
flow on
it might not be u but ya pen took ova coz this was phat

 

[MzBlkAngel]

this was soooooooooooo tight
my brother my brother
speechless is me......
i am with rich your pen took
over and u just glide
ok din
Peace
Angel

 

[Alpha Male]

Brother grew up on Ron O' Neal pimp skits
Superfly mind enslaved mental trips
practicing how to walk and talk like a cold muthaphhuka
bubbleeye cadillac soul sold brotha
on the screen of humanity that ni...g...guhs heart didn't register a blip

See, smooth words that stalked the weak minded
had him singing the blues while walking the street blinded,
by his own bull sh...yt...
tricked himself into thinking he wore the cloak in the ghetto pulpit
he pimped strutted sideways not cause he's cool/ cause pimps are
spineless

preying and praying to get a woman who has no sense of self
to spread her legs and let jonas-thons put their trophy on her private shelf
...that coward ni...g...gu...h did it for the money
an honorable livin' he could have given himself was to da...m..n funny
just cause that negro got 30 percent he thought he had real wealth

life so trifling he practiced his "pimp slaps" and pimp speak
"b!...tch betta have my money" when she sit in this car after her feets hit them streets
in the back of his mind that negro was scared
he knew that if those word whipped women really understood, really cared
they could cut his @ss from ear to ear deep into the white meat

so pimp defeats pimp by being to da...m...n arrogant
straight up stupid negro thinking he heaven sent
holding a hand held high ready to strike like he's the lord
oblivious to the fact that his existence is abhorred

so when he sleeps and has his head turned
those hoes will get tired of walking...pull out their roscoes
and make the pimps flesh burn.

(c)2004 blakverb

Yo...Alpha...this ain't even me...but thanks for the (a)muse.

Black Verb I'll play by the rules of Destee
So I don't become a Mod's arrestee
I'll speak good about what you have produced
By the way your welcome for using my muse

I loved the way you started to rhyme
At the end of your poem right on time
Also your meter is most wonderful
In this forum it is most apropos

 

[blakverb]

Mzblk and Rich, thanks

Alpha,

Brother. Speak your mind. Don't speak good about what I have written for the sake of "not wanting to become" a Mod arrestee. That makes no sense to me. If your "speakin' good" to not make waves, that's patronizin' brother, and that's worse than your honest opinion. feel me.

blak

Black Verb I'll play by the rules of Destee
So I don't become a Mod's arrestee
I'll speak good about what you have produced
By the way your welcome for using my muse

I loved the way you started to rhyme
At the end of your poem right on time
Also your meter is most wonderful
In this forum it is most apropos