Black Poetry : How pimp defeats pimp ( A tribute to the pimp in Alpha male's HOW PIMP DEFEATS WHORE)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother grew up on Ron O' Neal pimp skits
    Superfly mind enslaved mental trips
    practicing how to walk and talk like a cold muthaphhuka
    bubbleeye cadillac soul sold brotha
    on the screen of humanity that ni...g...guhs heart didn't register a blip

    See, smooth words that stalked the weak minded
    had him singing the blues while walking the street blinded,
    by his own bull sh...yt...
    tricked himself into thinking he wore the cloak in the ghetto pulpit
    he pimped strutted sideways not cause he's cool/ cause pimps are
    spineless

    preying and praying to get a woman who has no sense of self
    to spread her legs and let jonas-thons put their trophy on her private shelf
    ...that coward ni...g...gu...h did it for the money
    an honorable livin' he could have given himself was to da...m..n funny
    just cause that negro got 30 percent he thought he had real wealth

    life so trifling he practiced his "pimp slaps" and pimp speak
    "b!...tch betta have my money" when she sit in this car after her feets hit them streets
    in the back of his mind that negro was scared
    he knew that if those word whipped women really understood, really cared
    they could cut his @ss from ear to ear deep into the white meat

    so pimp defeats pimp by being to da...m...n arrogant
    straight up stupid negro thinking he heaven sent
    holding a hand held high ready to strike like he's the lord
    oblivious to the fact that his existence is abhorred

    so when he sleeps and has his head turned
    those hoes will get tired of walking...pull out their roscoes
    and make the pimps flesh burn.

    (c)2004 blakverb

    Yo...Alpha...this ain't even me...but thanks for the (a)muse.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome outstanding bounce
    brutha ya craft and the way u lay it
    takes a mind in deep love it love it love it !!!!!!
    flow on
    it might not be u but ya pen took ova coz this was phat
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was soooooooooooo tight
    my brother my brother
    speechless is me......
    i am with rich your pen took
    over and u just glide
    ok din
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Black Verb I'll play by the rules of Destee
    So I don't become a Mod's arrestee
    I'll speak good about what you have produced
    By the way your welcome for using my muse

    I loved the way you started to rhyme
    At the end of your poem right on time
    Also your meter is most wonderful
    In this forum it is most apropos
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mzblk and Rich, thanks

    Alpha,

    Brother. Speak your mind. Don't speak good about what I have written for the sake of "not wanting to become" a Mod arrestee. That makes no sense to me. If your "speakin' good" to not make waves, that's patronizin' brother, and that's worse than your honest opinion. feel me.

    blak

     
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    flow it
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Well, however this scribe came about, I'm lovin the message and the way you laid it.
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    you told a epic tale
    of a man with a soul for sale...
    very tight my brother...
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this one here should be resurrected!

    2fish
     
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    he pimped strutted sideways not cause he's cool/ cause pimps are
    spineless


    this is raw blak.....
     
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