Black Poetry : How much I wanna love you

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You don't have an inkling of a clue

    About how much I wanna love you

    You even show up nightly in my dreams

    I wanna love you so much my soul screams

    You ever want something you you should't have

    But without it you felt so lost and depraved

    Like in its absence the sun would stop shining

    And all of the planets would just stop aligning

    Baby you don't know how much i wanna love you

    I could dine on our love my whole life through

    And never go hungry for loving you sustains me

    And in your arms is exactly where I want to be

    I'd offer you the moon if I were mine to give

    If it would ensure in your heart I always live

    You can't imagine how much I wanna love you

    I've got a love hangover and I don't need no cure

    For I love being drunk on you for absolutely sure

    I got it bad, a very serious case of loves jones

    And this love is like a fire shut up in my bones

    I'm so glad that you showed up in this season

    For to my life you bring new purpose and reason

    And just you being you makes me want you more

    For I am feeling you way deep down in my core

    You'll never know how much I wanna love you
     
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    :em4600::kiss1: Beautiful
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaa!!
    if he can't feel this, coz i can and you wasn't talking to me

    Can i take his place
    show up in ya space
    feel tis love & grace
    and see da smile on ya face

    One may not know til u tell him
    let ya inner love be felt
    tell him of ya heart's wealth
    go head make dat step !!

    wow ! i love this piece it hit me in da heart , i know all this so well
    da feeling of wanting and yet have or to touch and hold but can't
    U drop a deep heartfelt scribe here wit so much realsm.
     
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    asimple:
    You had me with the title,
    "How Much I Wanna Love You"
    I luv it...and the scribe truly
    justifies it. Lovely Write!!!


    Much Luv
     
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    great poem. u let us know, now u need to go get ur man.lol
     
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    BallOfConfusion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh girl, you just put all my thoughts into this perfect package. very very good-i know how you feel.
     
  7. BLASTHEME

    BLASTHEME Active Member MEMBER

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    A.S.POET, ....

    This is spoken from the truth of love.....very beautifully done,,,uhhhhhh(lol) and like Rich said......

    :read:Can I take his place?
    Has he found his way to your space?
    Has love drawn him to you?
    Or do you find that the picture you imagined was only traced? hmmm
     
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    Let him know , tell him so , don't let him go !
    was he just a memory or a fact
    let him know where ya heart's at .............

    still drifting inside this piece of heartfelt scribe
     
  9. BLASTHEME

    BLASTHEME Active Member MEMBER

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    Does It?

    :teach:Does it feel as though your heart is broken?
    Distressed emotionally, constricted throat, gagging and choking?
    Still holding on to what you felt and feel?
    Express it to him, because only what's real can heal!
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    asimplepoet,

    Very powerfully done. As do all other posters, I am no different with my feelings toward this write. It touches very deeply and reflects true love to die for.

     
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