Black Poetry : How many brothers claim...

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How many brothers woof
    on how they wrote the book
    on love, sex, and romance
    yet can't even read what your
    body has written?

    how many claim they know how
    to find, hit, lick your g spot
    and don't even know the sexual
    alpha bet? don't know the
    beginning to pleasing you?

    how many brothers wanna write
    you poetry about making you
    see things you never seen
    yet can't verbally draw the scene
    with verses?

    how many claim to leave you
    shaking, forget your name,
    continue foreplay after you
    come into another feeling?
    how many?

    5,6,7,8, all of them...

    how many claim to be a multi-minute
    man yet broke on time?
    leaving you on the quickest
    curb of orgasm alone?
    thumbing for a "satisfying" ride?

    too many...

    how many times have you
    sat there wishing that someone
    would take you there, bring you back,
    put you to sleep, then paint your
    dreams without going outside the lines

    of licking the sweat off you?

    stay within the geography of your
    epidermal epiphanies / locate you
    hiding behind a scream / helping you
    release / that muscle spasm that
    wanted to live with the feeling for much
    longer than the rest /

    how many times have you yearned for a
    tongue that could teach you languages
    while dancing through your forest and humming
    hmmmm....hmmmm....hmmmmm...
    humming an ode to your orgasm
    'til you replicate it seven times?

    leaving you buried so deep
    in egyptian linens that your name
    becomes nefertiti /

    and you envision yourself standing
    at the edge of the river that flows
    from you / knowing that great civilizations
    breathe life because of you

    I am that man who wrote the book
    read you in braille as our bodies touched
    found it, pleased it with impressions and
    licked it until it purred "GGGGGggggg"
    I am the one that named it ,not peaches,
    but mango cause the spot I found was exotic

    I am the man that drew the scene with verses
    that you chased around like a chocolate
    naked body and your punany's sweet tooth hurt

    I am the one that left you shaking / a blak leaf under
    a brisk blow of an exhalation/
    I am...
    the one whose name you assumed when you
    forgot yours and called me you
    I am the multi-minute man who paid
    you so now forthcumming generations of orgasms
    will never be broke
    and took you around the world without leaving
    the bedroom, or kitchen, or bathroom, or
    wherever we chose to procreate

    I danced through your forest
    got to the point where I saw no light
    inscribed my name on your walls
    and became the proud father of seven

    I am the one that took your hand to help
    you stand at the edge of your river...

    then I drank again

    I am the egyptian king
    that all the others wish to
    be.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Royal BLaK-NeSs.


    you know what?... i'm not gonna even TRY to
    say a single... solitary thing about this piece...

    'cause i have no words to do it justice.

    but ****!... if you could see what i feel!...
    it would be a phenomenal thang! :)

    :heart:
    Ga~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    verb man

    ya speaketh truth and blowin up round here:eek:
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA, I'm a poet I have a very imaginative mind :) I was waiting for you to respond to see what the "queen of love" had to say. thank you.

    verb
     
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    too **** many... that's how many.

    but you... you are hot. this was.... i'm with GA no words to describe. i'm in awe.

    got any brothers like you in MD? i sure could use one right about now... :D
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hahaha... "the Queen of love"? (i'ont know 'bout dat!)
    but i do know that this piece (along with a few othas
    that i have in my BLaK collection)... will sure-ly make you
    the King of Hearts. :) it's alla that... Really!

    (it has to be when it makes ME speech-less!) :lol:

    oops! one mo thang...
    ****! i wish you could see what i feel...
     
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    BlakMan!!!

    You got a brotha like G speechless like the sistahs up in here!!!

    Sensational scribe Verb!!!!

    I'm forever bowing to your greatness in verse!!!!

    :peace: & Respect/
    GQ
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ, thanks brother as always. you always show a brother love and i'm grateful, thanks (whenever we get this Poetflow together we gone have to sit down and chat)

    MsBerry_98, Queen I do know a couple of brothers but they're married. I'm not sure if cats understand like I do anyway :laugh:

    GA, Queen you know you done went and inspired another piece. Coming up...."If you could see what I feel"

    blak
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CIndy, watch out now!!! :D

    Brother $$RICH$$, the brother that shows love no doubt. thanks partner. the next time I'm in the Chi we have got to hook up.

    blak
     
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