Black Poetry : How I See You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by unfoolish1223, Mar 4, 2004.

  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your eyes are so hypnotizing...
    they take me far away in a deep
    trance...I wish I could see everything
    you see...I wish you could see how
    much you complete me...I'm not confused I know
    you'r not mine, and I know you would
    never be with me, but somehow you make
    me whole...To me you are more than a woman
    you'r the girl of my dreams and you'r even more
    than I imagined u to be...You showed me that
    there is a such thing as perfection because
    thats exactly what you are to me...I wish your
    heart somehow connected to mine, and maybe
    that will make me a better person, maybe
    thats what I need to be with someone
    like you...If you were my girl I swear that'll
    make all my dreams come true...Just to hear
    you call brings a smile to my face...Your voice
    helps me sleep better...helps me think better...
    it just makes me better...Since all I can do
    right now is hear your voice maybe thats what
    it is about you that completes me...Everything
    you say...Everything I hear you do...maybe thats
    what makes me want to be a part of you...
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    welcome to destee...
    your entrance is well noted
    with this tyte scribe....
    24/7 drop ya pieces and get live...
    i'll wait for more
    in your poetic side ride.....:star: :star: :star:
    nice scribe bruh...
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well im a female but thank u for the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the peace & love u found
    tyte scribing sistah as i bless u some love
    from above welcome to the family
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You gave us a clear picture of how you see the one so dear to your heart...welcome to destee!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    likes ya flow
    welcome to destee.com
    hope to read more