Black Poetry : How I love thee...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Agentshaft007, May 21, 2002.

  1. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "oh how I love thee, let me count the ways"
    To borrow this phrase
    It has recently defined these past days
    My mind consumed with you
    I'm in a love sick daze
    How many ways?
    I couldnt count so high
    high is me on the essence of you
    breathing you in and feeling you
    coursing through my veins
    washing away pains
    of relations past
    didn’t last
    I know this one will
    you instill a love so deep
    deep as in comatose sleep
    I'm happy and still weep
    from my head to my feet you really do...
    love me
    And I...YOU

    :love:
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Double O7...

    Nice one my brotha!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    high is me on the essence of you
    breathing you in and feeling you
    ......See now this here is what greatness is all about ...go head now , feeling this one
    breathlessly :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis one hit top chart u flowed dis love right out....
     
  5. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Yall

    I love the feedaback and encouragement. I dont get to the local poetry reading and open mics that much, so this is actually betta than bein there.

    ;)
     
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