Black Poetry : How I felt

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, May 10, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHAT.............Whats wrong?...........
    How about Im struggling with the fact fo being left all alone!
    Trying to subside this feeling that chills me to the bone!

    I swear all I ever wanted to do was be honest!
    I had no intentions of inflicting you with a feeling of being harnest!
    Only wanted you to know where I stand
    Wanted to assure you, that for "ANY" need you had, I was your man!
    But you couldnt see pass the thought of being in a relationship...........
    All you kept saying is how you couldn't commit

    See the relationship was never a necessity, However didnt sound to bad
    just wanted you to consider us...........better yet the future we could have

    Only to be barricaided by the imperfection you experienced your past
    Never wanted this to be trouble.....Simly to prove some things last!


    Lj
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Ahhhhhhh!
    It's sad how the past
    can cause us to miss
    out on the greater
    things in life!
    Loved it!
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I truly feel you on this Purple moons.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL FELT SCRIBE ....WE CAN MISS GOODNESS SOME TIME
    THIS WAS LIKE BITTERSWEET
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I heard you here, letting the past continue to ruin the future. Much truth in this write, poet of the week.
     
  6. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THnks, thnks, I appreciate the read :spin:
     
  7. Khasm13

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    right...
    somethings do last....forever
    one love
    khasm
     
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