Black Poetry : hOw I fEeL

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  1. NaeDaTrU1

    NaeDaTrU1 New Member MEMBER

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    I dont know alot of things
    Especially the reason why I stay up crying
    Sometimes I get tired of hiding who i really am
    I just feel people wont accept me or understand my plan
    I have so much bull**** on my chest
    And feel it'll never be put to rest
    I try, I cry, and i feel i could never face up to my fears
    I feel people won't understand what lies deep down in the drops of my tears
    I try to shine the fact that im still in love
    Cause i have someone
    and i wanna make it work
    But everytime i look deep inside me it just seems to hurt
    Sometimes i feel unimportant and left out
    Sometimes i wonder if i'll solve the puzzle of what my lifes about
    I feel so pressured, insecure, unworthy
    I wonder if people mean what they say and truly care for me
    I sometimes feel like a stranger to myself
    Dont know the reasons behind my actions or Y i chose to go this route
    I dont even understand my feelings
    ...But this is how i feel
    & im Scared
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    welcome poet...
    this was a heartfelt scribe that you laid on da line
    everyone has doubts at times...
    be we must always remember that God put us here
    for a reason...tap into that
    and your feelings will get back on track...
    keep flowin poet...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome poet,

    You are not alone we're all scared, we just keep on beleiving. Peace.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this piece some love
    continue to share and flow strap on ya love joy !
    this was very nicely done welcome poet ! to the family.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So much in life to be scared of, but I believe that there is something wonderful and unique about each of us, if you can't embrace that about yourself, then who else can? I felt this piece, and I welcome you to destee. Flow some more.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya deeply, poet. Thanks for bringing this emotive scribe to us. Welcome to the Destee family! Great to have ya here, and hope to read more from ya.
     
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