Black Poetry : how I feel*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How I really feel*

    (This heah should be easy*)

    Woman...

    From my heart to your eyes—
    I find it hard to be without you—

    It seems

    I struggle through days that
    Don’t consist of you—

    Your smile—

    Compliments all the pleasures of earth
    And gives me a reason to arise—
    Facing the day—
    Instead of sleeping
    And wasting away...
    Quite often...I pray
    That i might have you...one day

    Woman*...

    You dance graceful in my mind—
    Flawlessly—
    Like glistening eyes—

    I stand fascinated—
    Like a young child
    in connection with the world around—

    Astounded*

    I don’t know what you do to me—
    But don’t stop*
    Keep
    Doing what you do*

    *this is how i really feel*



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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Hope

    she was listening--because you have said what flows froim the heart and you have said it well and with feeling--thanks for sharing this piece of you--Amun-Ra


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    TRUELY

    SHE SEE AND HEAR YO VOW OF LOVE
    AND SHE WILL SPEAK OUT UPON U
    I LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL DISPLAY OF ART..:heart: :love: :heart:
     
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    sean

    nice flow
    and tell the woman also

    how you really feel
    dawg

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