Quiet Poetry Lounge : How I Feel Today...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tashatoya, Mar 9, 2006.

  1. tashatoya

    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well I Haven't Posted In A While So I Hope Ya'll Enjoy!



    How I feel today is a reflection
    Of how I felt last night when we were
    Together
    Because at that moment our bodies collapsed
    Into the realization that we were meant to be
    And that’s all that mattered
    Not the bills, or family, work,
    Just the thought of being alone, everything else
    All went away as we became one melting
    Into each other… how sweet it seemed
    How I feel today, is how I felt last night
    I was able to breathe without being scared
    Able to express my feelings without shedding
    Tears
    You suppress my pain, the bitterness,
    The misunderstanding
    With you, everything seems to fall
    Exactly into place,
    Never in worry or regret
    And if we don’t stay together forever at least I can say
    That I was in love, and I knew how it felt in its
    Most rarest form… naked, with no sight, No judgment
    Just as it was, equality mixed with passion
    Like no one else but us have ever felt before,
    How I feel today
    I would like to feel forever, as if every pore
    Is open and every scab healed, every cracked
    Glued directly together, so fitted as if it didn’t
    Even look as if it were cracked to begin with
    Now because of you I am whole again
    And how we shared it was beautiful it was
    Open, secure, opinionated, dripping with a
    Sweetness that not even milk and honey could
    Touch
    If you ask me it was kind of like Poetry and that’s what
    Made it so passionate, exhilarating, on the edge
    Of something so worth while
    As if it can only be attainable by you & me
    Because
    When are bodies, souls, minds, and hearts
    Are placed together…
    They create fireworks,
    They create thought,
    They create simplicity in the most complex and intriguing
    Way
    How I feel today is how I feel
    Only when I am alone
    With you...

     
  2. sonnee01

    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey tashatoya...this was expressed with a very soft and sweet tone... Just Beautiful!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    That magic feel ...enjoyed this sweet release.
     
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