Black Poetry : ~How Hard Is It~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Sep 14, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emotions...

    Symphony and Orchestra's of
    passion

    diluted visions and razor sharp
    incisions that seem to
    result in a real elision.

    I rock with the waves
    on the choppy seas.
    No light,
    No sound,
    No tears;
    Not even the familiar thump of a heartbeat.
    Still I breath.

    Voice of Heaven,
    Breath of Hell
    lost sensations and the constant ringing of
    bells.
    Do I run toward the white light?
    Do I fail to set my sights?
    Which way is wrong than right...

    Illumination then dims...
    In a quick second I loose every shred of my
    masculinity and become femme.
    Fatale,
    instead of making the winning shot, I
    dropped the ball.
    My mind whirls around its own dust,
    there's overload and downloading that
    follows.

    I take time out to pause and step out of
    reality..
    Tickle, sneezes and then the cough...
    How come I didn't realize that making decisions
    are so d**n tough?

    ~Copyright 2004
    PropheticNysght
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' my my my !!!!
    this right here was str8 off the hook had my mind & soul into it
    what u just pen together is deep and fill wit depth & emotions
    from da river bank da waters speaks in tongue listen carefully !
    wow! how i love this piece of art work here one of my favorites
    flow on....
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    can't be to hard..when all that creativity is flowing..
    can't be to hard..when all that imagery if living
    can't be to hard...when one is constantly giving..
    can't be...to...hard
    can't be
    can't

    wonderful scribe
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad... that you've decided to write!

    Keep On, hear?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up bring mo of dis here !!!!
     
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    this was a tight drop
    enjoyed the flow!!!!
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord Rich you are truly a blessing and inspiration to my spirit. I can't really say much because i'm so full right now! Thank you pa.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for your beauty and words of life and encouragement. I am deeply touched and I thank you greatly. Much love.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words that deeply touch my soul Poet! Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will indeed Rich! I appreciate you for continuously supporting up and making me feel very much so apart of the family.
    God bless pa and much love.
     
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