Black Poetry : How Does It Feel?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Apr 8, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Curious just to see your reaction
    How do you like it if I caress you like that?
    How do like it if I kiss you in that spot?


    I just want to please you
    And make everything all right

    How does that make you feel?
    If I turn off the lights?

    I wanna make your head spin circles
    Work magic like miracles

    Strokin the palm of your hand
    And eliminating any stress
    Terminating all the areas that are tense

    Releasin precious fluids and chemicals
    That need to be escaped

    And tampered with
    Just to indicate
    I want to send a message across
    To your nerves to smile and appreciate

    When I look into your eyes
    Does you heart turn to butterflies?

    Do I please your mind
    And am I your preferable choice?

    How does it feel
    If I take my clothes off?
    Around the naked eyes to see?

    Trying to unnerve you
    Intensly,and demanding
    Aggression

    I want to make sure you hear my affection
    Freak ya movements
    In your perameter

    How does it feel
    When I tell you these things?

    Desert Storm
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feels pretty **** good ma...lol diggin ya style!

    Reas
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Reason,I think I'm out for now! Hee,hee,hee! Have fun in here. Cuz I'm gettin tired. Lol. Thanks for the compliments. I appreciate it!
    Desert Storm
     
  4. Street So'ja

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    feels good

    real good

    loving the flow
    Storm
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touchy Feely

    Nice touch and the pun is intended--well done--Amun-Ra
     
  6. Afridancr

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    Whirlwinds!!!

    How does it feel???

    Well sis, the way you flowin...I feel a Storm comin up in hea!!!lol

    Tight!:)
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amun-Ra

    Hey!,I wasn't too sure y'all would be feelin this one but thanks alot for peeps! Hee!Hee!Hee! Something a lil new than the norm.
    Desert Storm
     
  8. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja Glad you feelin this one!

    WEll,I didn't guess y'all would feel this. I guess I was just playin around lookin for something new to put down. Thanks for the reponses!
    Desert Storm
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey,gurl,well ya know! Hee hee hee,I had some fun writin this one sis. Just wanted to see how this went down. Hee hee hee. Thanks for the positive feedback. Really appreciate it.
    Desert STorm
     
  10. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin yah piece sis! FLOW IT!
     
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