Black Poetry : How does it feel

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How does it feel
    when i whisper sweet hush
    seen your heart in a rush

    How does it feel
    when my love confess
    and my touch comfort & caress

    How does it feel
    as da queen of morrow
    place'd on obyss my sensual flower

    How does it feel
    at da temple of my soul
    where my love forever hold

    How does it feel
    on da glist of my kiss
    and da rapture from my bliss

    How does it feel
    as u have sweet dream
    of me da man unseen

    How does it feel
    when we share our thoughts
    and da secercy we sought

    How does it feel
    inside my arms
    layin in awe from da manly charm

    how does it feel
    to glow ya smile
    to be heard in beauty and loud

    awaiting me on image cloud
    how does it feel sweet lady
    when u lone no more
    for my love is deep to da core

    tell me how do u feel !:SuN034:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm...my guess would be
    that it feels like
    an untitled symphony

    with every melodic note
    feathering down the tenderness
    of all that he's ever wrote

    Seems to me, she feels
    the softness of a cloud's embrace
    stroking the smile upon her face

    I'll bet it feels like
    rose petals gently caressing
    while those secrets are confessing

    Probably feels like a cool breeze
    causing a luscious chill
    from the stroke of his quill

    I believe she feels
    the passionate kiss
    that releases such bliss
    yes this
    is what I feel
    she feels
     
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    If u feel this as she would
    then ya heart of love withstood
    da passionate glist of rapture
    from da well of my soul captured

    So u feel da bliss of romanticness
    and the spray / showers of happiness
    through da magical sweetest of kiss
    and the clash of my sensual twist

    what u feel is real !!!!!!!
     
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