Black Poetry : How Does it Feel? (u dont have to respond, just needed to release some emotion)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Aug 21, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u lied to me
    tried to be
    somewhat of a wifey
    im sorry but i dont take lying lightly
    see now i know
    that ur a H0
    im glad my love didnt grow
    cuz it probably wouldve been hard to let u go
    i dont wanna apology
    cuz honestly
    i wanna see
    u off away from me
    will u change? probably-
    not
    cuz ive met a lot
    of girls that meet u with a plot
    to take ur heart and all u've got
    maybe thats why im not shocked
    cuz i've been there, done that
    this game, ive been run that
    i'd be a fool if i asked u to come back
    cuz i see u got this one track
    mind
    c'mon baby, ive already run this track
    i dont need an explanation
    cuz this is a f*cked up situation
    I even had a conversation
    with one of the girls ur datin
    told all of the things that u be sayin
    but more power to ya, im not no type of hater
    Ma, how u think u were gonna pimp a player?
    i knew u were twisted as soon as i took a look at ur inner layer
    ima talk to the lord about ya tho, cuz u need a prayer
    but if it was me, oh no there'd be problems
    then we'd have to "sit down and solve them"
    u know that get down to the bottom
    of this type of philosophy
    but ma, this type of sh*t here lost me
    think i wont leave? watch me
    i know im wifey material
    and i dont have to take some more ******** from some serial -
    killer of hearts
    if i would've known then, what i know now
    u and i wouldnt have gotten down
    u quiet now, why no sound?
    hahaha... yes! I have clowned
    look at what i found
    even H0's have a heart that pounds
    but im done with it, can't say its been great
    So tell me... how does it feel to get played?
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my! :lol: well yes indeed u told it lol :)vent baby vent
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dammm........................i feel the steam off of this
     
  4. oraiders11

    oraiders11 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay now.
    I hope all is well and every one who went through such have the power to move on and not drag it to next relationship.
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh mos def oraiders11... i know SwtT, but im good, im just done with the games u know? but thanks for readin n replying...
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speak it out loud and let it be known
    it's o'k to vent !
    u said it here with true meanings
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ is right. And I wish when I vented it sounded this good. :cool:
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$Rich$$ and gempis...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    feeling the emotional
    outlet on this piece
    to the point
    straight
    nice very nice
    Peace
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this poem, it was a show of emotion and release
    much love,
    -story
     
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