Black Poetry : How Does it Feel? (u dont have to respond, just needed to release some emotion)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Aug 21, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u lied to me
    tried to be
    somewhat of a wifey
    im sorry but i dont take lying lightly
    see now i know
    that ur a H0
    im glad my love didnt grow
    cuz it probably wouldve been hard to let u go
    i dont wanna apology
    cuz honestly
    i wanna see
    u off away from me
    will u change? probably-
    not
    cuz ive met a lot
    of girls that meet u with a plot
    to take ur heart and all u've got
    maybe thats why im not shocked
    cuz i've been there, done that
    this game, ive been run that
    i'd be a fool if i asked u to come back
    cuz i see u got this one track
    mind
    c'mon baby, ive already run this track
    i dont need an explanation
    cuz this is a f*cked up situation
    I even had a conversation
    with one of the girls ur datin
    told all of the things that u be sayin
    but more power to ya, im not no type of hater
    Ma, how u think u were gonna pimp a player?
    i knew u were twisted as soon as i took a look at ur inner layer
    ima talk to the lord about ya tho, cuz u need a prayer
    but if it was me, oh no there'd be problems
    then we'd have to "sit down and solve them"
    u know that get down to the bottom
    of this type of philosophy
    but ma, this type of sh*t here lost me
    think i wont leave? watch me
    i know im wifey material
    and i dont have to take some more ******** from some serial -
    killer of hearts
    if i would've known then, what i know now
    u and i wouldnt have gotten down
    u quiet now, why no sound?
    hahaha... yes! I have clowned
    look at what i found
    even H0's have a heart that pounds
    but im done with it, can't say its been great
    So tell me... how does it feel to get played?
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Oh my! :lol: well yes indeed u told it lol :)vent baby vent
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dammm........................i feel the steam off of this
     
  4. oraiders11

    oraiders11 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay now.
    I hope all is well and every one who went through such have the power to move on and not drag it to next relationship.
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh mos def oraiders11... i know SwtT, but im good, im just done with the games u know? but thanks for readin n replying...
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speak it out loud and let it be known
    it's o'k to vent !
    u said it here with true meanings
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ is right. And I wish when I vented it sounded this good. :cool:
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$Rich$$ and gempis...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    feeling the emotional
    outlet on this piece
    to the point
    straight
    nice very nice
    Peace
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this poem, it was a show of emotion and release
    much love,
    -story
     
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