Black Poetry : How Does It Feel Baby?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jun 11, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another song...


    VERSE 1:

    how does it feel baby?
    to know not know where i am tonite
    you lay in the bed all alone
    wonderin' where i'm gone
    so many nights you left me the same way
    alone, isolated, in desperate pain
    so how does it feel tonite?
    cuz your on the other
    the other side

    CHORUS:

    how does it feel baby?
    the other side is waiting
    now you know how i feel when you hurt me
    so many days
    so many ways
    i wonder if your cryin'
    i wonder if your lonely
    oh i know exactly how you feel
    tell me how does it feel baby?

    VERSE 2:

    i hope you feel cold under the sheets
    without my body as your company
    i can't understand your deserting me
    thats why i had to get up and leave
    you probably think i'm comin' home tonight
    but baby i'm for real
    i'm leavin' this time
    so don't even wait up for me
    cuz tonight i gettin' treated, like i should be

    CHORUS (again)

    HOOK:

    how does it feel baby?
    tell me
    cuz boy i know it hurts like hell...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awe snap !!! dis was off da hook
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man..tell it !! :) i like!
     
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    thanks alot rich!:)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oops i didn't see ur post SwtT...anyway thanks girl:)
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey LovelyGoldenOne,

    I feel you on this one!! I love the self- enpowering message!!

    :thanks: for sharing it!!

    ~Sierra~:toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she got it going on ......we gotta do a collab
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much sierra!!

    u got it goin' on too rich! i'd love to do a collab with u:)
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ouch!

    man oh man. now that's heat.
    I bet he felt that!
    Peace!
     
  10. 1poetsought

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    This works... cause it hurts like hell.
     
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