Black Poetry : How Do U Know About Love?

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you are not
    But you want to be
    But infidelity
    Then you don't care 4 me
    Like you used to
    Because you don't do........
    You know..
    The things I do
    To show you care
    Or is it the way you feel
    When the other one is not there?

    Or

    Is it the way you speak
    or the way you stroke
    A place
    On your mate's anatomy
    Envokeing pleasure
    Beyond measure

    Is that love
    Or lust?
    THAT cum'z through the gutz
    and explodes from the Nut'z
    Showering seeds of life
    the way you like
    Or do you simply change the sheetz
    and wait for the next pair of feet?

    Or do you forgive
    Forget
    Or move on to the next EX?
    woth your heart not your head
    because anyoneone can share a bed
    But......
    can you sleep in the one you've made?

    Or is love an illusion in your mind
    created to share
    The emotions you bare
    which masterbates
    the mind, heart and soul

    Do you hold
    youe lover accountable
    In surmountable
    To your standards
    and measures
    Of love
    or do you surrender
    to the contender
    or are you a pertender?

    Ain't that some ****
    you're called a bastard or a *****
    but here's the trick
    where's the click
    Or flip of the switch
    or changing of the script
    It's kind of said when
    your heart doesn't even know when to quit
    or how to sit
    Or simply shut the F up and be QUIET

    You don't
    you see love is but a vision
    of what one desires to have
    to hold
    and somtimes to just be

    The start
    First within the heart
    then within your mind
    and in time
    you learn yoiu cannot seperate
    the ying from the yang!


    So How do you Know Love?

    caramelpython 2005
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi There Brotha Python
    So wonderful to see you :wave:
    It is so good to feel your scripts again poet

    My goodness
    I can feel you are deep so deep in thoughts
    from the heart, feeling your question and more
    Or is love an illusion in your mind

    It is indeed a question since the age of time
    How do you know love?
    No one soul love or feel love the same
    It will always be different
    The start
    First within the heart
    then within your mind
    and in time
    you learn yoiu cannot seperate
    the ying from the yang!
    Can there be a seperation?
    See you have me asking question
    Much love to you dear brotha:grouphug:
    It's so wonderful to have you home

    Peace
     
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    Real nice poet
    Welcome to the family
    Love this piece for real
    You at home now brutha
     
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    What a great flow. Very nice.

    I like how you brought this around.

    Or do you forgive
    Forget
    Or move on to the next EX?
    woth your heart not your head
    because anyoneone can share a bed
    But......
    can you sleep in the one you've made?

    If you make your bed hard. ( On the ground, board or cardboard ) You do have to sleep on it!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just love the way you vibe
     
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    Definitely more than just a warm body, this is quite a question. It means different things to different people, but no one can refute its power. I enjoyed the way you delved into this, and so good to read something new from you poet.
     
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    I haven't had a Caramel Fixx in a while...
    this was definitely...water in the desert
    and worth the wait
    I am sooooo loving this piece
    Philosophical and moving
    ...This was gorgeous!

    Loving it...
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man o' man this was madd tyteeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    This was an excellent scribe, my brother...

    Peace!
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :geek: I just wanted to take time out to thank the family for the support on my work and thoughts.:luvu:
    I respect u all and I appreciate the love returned to me.:geek:
     
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