Black Poetry : HOW DO I !!!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How do i say what my heart feel
    when your mind not ready to listen
    how do i express these emotions
    when you betray them on notions.

    Where do i start, where every door
    closed for repair or not willingly
    to see beyond the past to mend
    all the broken pieces or feel trusting
    is only an illusion in a fusional maze.

    How do i get beyond the walls
    to provide my loyality and love
    open the vault to trusting and
    shower the heart in caressin hope.

    What words do i pen that will speak
    give value of intrest that say i do
    when i have no clue of what u feel
    where u been and seen beyond lovin

    I value your heart and emotions
    i can only say love is like a soft feather
    to bring a fancy laughter of tickles
    yet i understand love can be a thorn
    piercing the heart that is agony and tears

    I feel u are my other half to my whole
    an unlikely two dancing in eternity
    as i try to bond love in words that is so,
    so fragile deeply touched as my mind
    filled in fantasies to connect us

    Yet i'm banished into another thought
    on a created loneliness dreammin
    deep inside my slumber in the corner
    of my darken chambers, yet glitters
    your face in golden sparkles of desires

    So i pray to God , no more delay
    no more confusion and release this curse
    to every need that inspires my heart
    to love you openly and willingly faithful
    don't leave me standing on this edge in life.


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  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i luved dis piece honest 2 god
    i mean reading dis poem tuk me bak in the past whurr i didnt want to go
    it made me think about that bratha that wanted 2 express so much of his feelinz 2 me and my dumb behine left him hangin becuz i didt want 2 believe luv was real..(shakin my head sayin dayum)
    so flo on wit nonstop my bratha rich in rhymes


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When one's seem alone
    and her heart torn
    between love and betrayal
    at the steps to close
    the window on what maybe
    there is no words to express
    to reach and be define......

    Thank u GhettoAmbition for the lovin visit into the maze of how do i.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one really pulled at my heart strings. Gifts from God do not appear every day, they need to be cherished and treated as such. Quite an emotive piece.
     
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    These are the gifts that go un-notice and yet defined / labled
    and misunderstood , it's becoming rare that these great treasures
    are taken in ........Thank u for feeling this piece , the story behind
    it if i could tell it u wouldn't believe...............................................
     
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    what can one say that will address
    every thought , means and love
    not sensual but the warmth
    i wanna know ................................
     
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    How do you love a man who dont even kno you exist
    He couldnt find ya amongst all the the wits

    Because someone has time and time again has overlook
    I tell ya you cant let people tell you how to love just from any book

    How do you make him see that your the one
    How can I forget our troubles what's done is done

    How do I know that we wasnt meant to me
    How do I make the man to see

    That we only have one life
    And Im trying to let him see that i could become his wife

    But he continues to search for lost treasure
    When he knows in his heart noone can measure

    Because everytime when he turns the wrong hits him in the face
    and he just had to get a taste

    Of what wasnt meant for him
    But my love for you never grew dim
    Even tho every thing was out of wim

    but i never stop loving you
    asking my heavenly father on what should i do

    crying my out heart for to a man who cant see in my big pretty eyez
    that unlike the other gurlz i dont wear a disquise
    or come of up with a scheme or demise
    cause i despise

    when she's taking what was rightfully mine
    but then again you would never give me the time

    even tho my heart beats and skip every time i hear your voice
    to see you with another saddens me so i have no choice

    but to let you go
    even tho you dont know

    that I loved you

    So

    How do I

    loved a man who dont know i exist............
    :smooch:
     
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    What word can be put to form
    to express the love of one
    when she only see and feel
    the myth and turn away from reality
    how do you get pass the daydreams
    and the silent screams for one
    just one moment that she might hear
    take time to feel what the heart saying
    taste the core of his existance
    how do you tell her in words
    when she facing another as if u don't
    exist........Maybe it's best to walk away
    maybe it's best to let da feelin go
    maybe just maybe it's not worth da pain
    how do i ...........................................

    Thankz for the flow and smooth reply Nevar and the love u give
     
  9. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet rich...


    this is a deep and beautifull expression......


    and there is a question in it....



    wel actualy i am full with questions and emotions ..and confussion right..
    now..

    (i,m now dealing with who am i where am i who was i)




    so i can probebly not give you the right advise and answer...


    but i do my best...


    but all i know ....
    and hope is that God can make everything right...
    clear...beautifull.....
    i do know that you have to work with him together....

    you have to first know what you feel....


    and than express it share it...with that person...

    only than you will know if it is real...


    when you have the lord fully in youre heart and you walk together with him..

    you know that he always have his back...



    the door was closed towards my heart to manny times....
    and i am not even mad because it was than not his will or not ment to be..

    i stood there manny times before others with this fire in my heart ...
    like lizz right song ""Fire"" (right now it seems like every fire i had for dreams or people or a person or talents ..is gone..........it wil come back hopefully )

    and they blew it out or blew it a way or ran or shut the door....

    but that is life....
    if you never open youre heart or try to open yourself to someone ,..
    or show that person what you feel (this is not about me that counts for everyone.....i,m not trying to win sumthing here with my advise you can not win love ....its there or its not..... ..cause that is not in my hands ....it is in destheny and in youre heart........besides i am realy disconnected here .....i lost me....in that jam)....



    and that person that you like is not not open ....
    you will never know..
    but somethimes when it is so strong ...
    it just breaks trough the walls....



    me...
    ...

    mmm?


    the me before i was jammed...
    in the car..


    i was not afraid...
    to show my fire...
    my heart...
    the love..

    didnt matter who stood there in front of me..
    didnt matter if i was turned down in front of the whole world...
    i dont care ..
    i have nothing to loose ..
    no status ..no face..
    no nothing..

    as long as i had the lord by my side...



    it hurts always though...
    you see thats were they got me wrong..
    i mean i need my time to recover ....:wine: :weights: :missu: :time: :horse:
    but i always want to recover cause the one who is out there is waiting for me....


    but like lizz sings...

    "'dont worry about me...
    i,ll stand here in the darkness with the joy that has been promesed ..
    to those who life..
    with open hearts..""...

    you knows...
    she knows inspide of the hearthage The hurt..

    there is someone..
    there is the one...

    who would take that fire cause that person is the one..






    sweet rich....





    beautifull soul..(hug)







    put god first in youre life ...

    he will guide you
    he will show you what you have to do..
    how ..he will give you the wisdom guidance and strength....

    to bring you to the one....



    he made you ..he knows what is good for you and he loves you much..
    loves us all...he wants you to be whole or One with youre love..

    do you believe that....


    i can not look that deep into youre heart from what is going on in there.....
    only god can....

    i dont know you that well.....
    (you know knowing like you know someone you speak often or see often)





    i dont know any one here on this net that well..


    i do feel verry connected somethimes with someone here....
    but even that is a mistery (i dont like mistery,s and i pray to god to solve them to)for me to somthimes....is that you ?it feld like that on a certain moments,but i had that with another brother to..."'manetary"
    and than the last time i saw the picture of a other brother ...and i feld it to......

    verry deep...




    (i think i need to go away for a while realy i am dizzy ...:wine: is it by the jamm of monday ...is it me in my head .......yeah i dont care you may al laugh,but i am not drunk)




    yes...

    well that was before the jam..



    i hope it comes back ....
    (i,m sorry its frozen right know lost ..cause i feel lost because of what happend monday)




    all i want to say....

    is ...


    be good to youre heart.....

    does not means only protect it...

    but it also means ..

    open it for beautifull things ..
    and persons..

    and only the lord and youre tight relationship.....(of course you actions towards him are also inportent)can
    show you....
    who you can open yourself up to..
    and what he has ment for you and gives you..
    as beautifull things and persons.......


    and that one......






    wow this was a long reply...


    well dont mind...



    i hope it was word it....
    lord i,m out of balance but i hope these words ...
    come from the good side of my centre...(wich is lost)...

    i hope so ..

    i think so...

    i know so..


    no i,m not :wine:


    just :yawn: right now....











    i,m out ....



    i,m knocked out...






    zzzzzzzzzzz











    yeah..




    zzzzzzz


    what everman...




    zzzzzzzzzz






    i need a good sleep....
     
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    hug:smooch: ....


    youre gonna be alright....


    pray for me ...



    aight.......


    lol


    zzzzzzzzzzzzz















    Loveauroraflower:heart: