Black Poetry : How do I undo you?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mkhaya lo', Jul 24, 2002.

  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how do I make you..
    tell you..
    see you..
    feel you..
    without tasting the danger on your lips..

    Why do you make me..
    fee like...
    this when...I can't...be like...this anymore...!

    how do I make you..
    knead you..
    into something..
    I could work with?

    waiting...hoping...brewing...overflowing...
    How do i take you inside my sporadic thoughts
    and make you into something I could swallow
    in my league and class?

    Let me at least....wait....a...while...to purify...my heart and
    thoughts...

    let me for a while....realise...the danger is real. it isn't a mental illusion or a fantasy game.
    You are dangerous to me.

    Let me check my heart.....
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW. This is one tight insightful read. Tho you be a male, this is also the way a lot of sistahs feel about a man whom they are drawn to. :)

    A thought provoking read!
     
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    BRAVO!!!!

    Applause and alla dat! I love what you did hea ma!

    Classic
    Reas
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You all are too kind!!!! thank you, by the way Joyce, I am a sistah, through and through...everything I feel and think , I do it as a woman...
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOPS! (covering my face) Now. I knows. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!! beautiful flow so poetically scribe
     
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