Black Poetry : How Do I Tell Him

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How do I tell him
    so that he will know
    that he is the rain
    that makes my garden grow

    That although my garden
    has some weeds
    He plucks them out
    and plants new seeds

    I want him to know that those seeds are
    magical cause they come from his mind
    And the flowers produced...
    the loveliest blossoms you'll ever find

    I want him to see the vibrant colors
    of each and every bloom
    magenta tiger lilies, pink blushed roses,
    a visual feast for the eyes to consume

    What I want is for him to smell the bouquet
    of my garden, let that scent allure him
    He should then feel each petal, delighting
    in their gentle delicacy to assure him

    that this garden is not plastic, it's not
    a painting, nor a mirage...it is real
    And this is only the beginning of
    how intensely I feel

    I suppose I'll have to keep telling him
    to make certain that he knows
    the beauty and the breadth
    of just how this garden grows

    How do I tell him...
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    niccccccce..... beautiful as usual....

    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How do u tell him things as such
    garden of beauty and sweet
    wow !
    if it was me i would know
    from the way your tender heart flow
    i would tell from the garden great beauty
    to know inside ur the dear cutie
    i would know even if i didn't say
    deep inside i would know ....But i guess ur right just keep assuring him it's his garden
    of roses and great treat that grows rapidly inside of thee.

    This made me think back and brought on a feelin i already know of .
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Miss Lady, glad you like my flows, much appreciated.
    Even if one knows, it's always great to be reminded, true. I suppose he does know... Thank you Rich for such a lovely response.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Most welcome ......it felt so good as it flowed tenderly
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's so sweet Rich. :)
     
  7. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    Talk about beautiful...
    This piece certainly is.




    Much Luv
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you 4Everluv for that very kind response. Nice to see ya.
     
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    this is a very lovely and colorful flow.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice write
     
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