Black Poetry : How do I say it???

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Suga Bear,

    te quiero (in spainsh)
    je vous aime (in French)
    l'amo (in Italian)
    Ik hou van u (in dutch)
    So how do I say dis…
    What other means do I have…
    Without sayin da words…
    You say it will get dry after a while..
    I don’t know another way to define
    Or refine the meaning of what is unfold
    In us..i been tryin..but
    ummmmm
    What I do…
    How do I say
    te quiero (in spainsh)
    je vous aime (in French)
    l'amo (in Italian)
    Ik hou van u (in dutch)
    You have the fix inside this mix…
    A remedy dat sends thrills down my spine..
    And puts me chills
    Dayum head over hills…
    So tell me what words do I say..
    Suga Bear...what????
    My Dear tears falls from my eyes
    Feelin deprive
    Not able to share them with you…
    The love is deep..
    With no depths it flows so smooth
    Like a perfect water fall..
    None stop….
    You laugh I giggle and the blushin
    Starts…
    Just a string that attaches two..:heart:
    But you say I cant express them words
    for it will dry it out…
    So what do I place them with…
    I want you
    I need you
    I know your mine…
    But at times…I need to cherish you
    In my way..and honor what you
    Have given to me..
    So what I do Suga Bear coz I don’t know
    I still have no way of sayin
    te quiero (in Spanish)
    je vous aime (in French)
    l'amo (in Italian)
    Ik hou van u (in Dutch)
    I Love You (in English)
    What do I say..
    How do I define it.
    Can ya tell me….
    Coz you use them with me…

    Love
    your...
    Suga Foot

    P.S
    I found in you what you found in me
     
  2. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woowwwww tyte piece. I really like the word play and the use of other languages
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte and original...i like it...
     
  4. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just like it is.................like your word choices
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da love...

    see i said it..
    but do he hear it...
    feel it within..know its true..
    from above i came..
    and placed claim..
    do ya hear can you deal..
    heck...do he even understand... :star:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte word play message heard surely
    wow ! da pen is bad ...
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read.....Rich

    glad ya stop and took time.. :angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh
    what a romantic
    mix of favor
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word play was off da charts...
    keep da pen in ya hand gurl...
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thanks Blue water for da love...

    yea ok Khasm but you may not say that about the next piece...
    but thanks fo da love bro :angel1: