Black Poetry : How Do I Get Over

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  1. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOW DO I GET OVER

    THE PAIN

    THE HURT

    THE EMPTY SPACE YOU LEFT INSIDE
    THE RUTHLESS ACTS YOU'VE DONE TO ME
    AS I SIT INSIDE MY EMPTY ROOM
    MEMORIES I HAVE HAD OF YOU
    THE FALSE GOOD TIMES YOU MADE ME FEEL.......

    D-MN YOU

    D-MN YOU FOR COMING INTO MY LIFE
    D-MN YOU FOR MAKING ME FEEL GOOD
    ONLY TO LEAD ME TO MY OWN DISPARE
    DROWNING IN THE HURT YOU'VE CREATED
    AS YOU MOVE ON WITH OUT A CARE
    DISCARDING MY HEART LIKE PAPER IN TRASH............

    HOW DARE YOU

    WHO GAVE YOU THE RITE
    AFTER ALL I'VE BEEN FOR YOU
    GIVING YOU EVERY THING I'M MADE OF
    YOU RUTHLESS FEIGN
    YOU VILLIAN OF THE HEART
    YOU STOLE FROM ME THE PUREST OF LOVE
    ALL THAT I WAS MADE OF
    YOU TOOK IT AND THREW IT DOWN
    WALKED OVER IT LIKE THE EARTH UNDER YOUR FEET
    LEAVING A CRUSHED HEART

    HOLLOW

    SCARRED

    WOUNDS STILL OPEN
    YET ARMORED FROM CUPIDS ARROW
    NOT ALLOWING LOVE TO COME IN
    NEITHER HATE TO ENTER
    CAUGHT ON A THIN LINE
    SWAYING TO EITHER SIDE
    NOT KNOWING WHERE IT WILL FALL..........

    YOU'VE PUT ME HERE!!!!!

    D-MN YOU!!!!!

    D-MN ME FOR ALLOWING YOU INSIDE
    LORD HELP ME
    FOR I CAN'T HELP TO WISH THE SAME ON YOU
    BUT IF I DO
    I'LL BE LIKE YOU
    AND I'M NOT
    I'M A GOOD MAN
    DISPITE ALL YOU'VE DONE TO ME
    I'LL ALWAYS BE THAT

    BUT

    I STILL CAN'T HELP TO WISH
    THAT I'VE NEVER MET YOU AT ALL

    WISHING

    I'VE NEVER KNOWN YOU
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    Release that pain brutha.....you let it go in the right place and created a nice drop...You continue being a good brutha and the right woman will see..you shining ;) .
    :thanks:
     
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    you have express alot of deep emotion
    in your poem, and yes i feel the efect
    you have ripple form this drop
    flow on brother
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  4. queentswana

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    Hi Turtle :wave: ...
    We all know the old saying..."IT'S BETTER TO HAVE LOVED AND LOST...THAN NEVER HAVE LOVED AT ALL" and I agree, you gave love from your :heart: and with divinity I might add...who lost?... and what did you lose?
    Her lost ...is someone else's gain. You're young, highly intelligent and a KING to behold...your QUEEN is yet to come. And your more wiser and a bigger person than those that you feel wronged you. Do not judge her for she just simply wasn't the one for you :nono: ...
    In life we must all go through cracked glass...before we get to the DIAMOND. You are indeed a beautiful person...and nothing can stop you from the DIVINE LOVE...that is your's to have and to hold...and that's real.
    love will be knocking...
    much luv to you...queentswana
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we cannot make sense of what has happened, and when all is said and done we still have to continue on with our lives. In time we learn from what went wrong, and find something that is truly right for us. I feel your pain, this was well expressed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let loose release da drama from da soul well felt scribe
     
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    release it
    just let it go
    feelin this oh man...
    the pain the fire
    the burning
    oh i love the way you brought this out
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Well put. I know it felt good to release some of that frustration. Good write.
     
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    Brother Turtle:eeek: ...this was heartfeld Poem....
    i realy feld the emotions...
    keep expresing brother and aspecially express to the person that caust you so much hurt...

    You know i,ve got youre back caus we are cool..(right)
    Now i can not believe someone did something horrable to you..
    I mean i have spoke to you "2 times" in the chat room i ones have heard youre beautifull voice there to...
    and we mailed a few times and you seems like a beautifull nice brother...
    and you deserve a woman a good nice woman..
    If i would walk with you as a friend in to the streets today and we would run into the woman who did this to you ...i would step to her and say ...

    ""how could you do this ......? you should have told him(the truth) that you thought he was someone else the moment you spoke with him on the phone for the first time""
    the moment you were starting to get intamate with him...the moments you started to expressing to him that you liked him that you are REALY in love with him...


    Yeah i would :teach: ....
    yes. i would tell her the



    TRUTH.....




    you got my back brother...

    and remember lords got youre back always ...
    he will heal you from the hurt that she caust you...
    believe me i have been had the dump the waithing the words without a meaning a few times to ..
    that always hurt...
    but just remember there is some out there



    Much love and strength..


    LIBERTYLADY:heart:
     
  10. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much fam!!!!! ;)
    Much love to you all!!!!! :spin: