Black Poetry : How Deep It Is.

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  1. Khai Tau

    Khai Tau Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I looked around for the support of my friends
    they were nowhere within range, couldnt even pretend they
    cared about whats up wit Tae, not a thing to say
    becuase they were absent.
    Trying to turn to the woman I loved, had to be sent from above
    Right? wrong, she fell outta love a long time ago
    She was already on her own, I just didnt know
    Was her heart in it, she coudlnt be sho. Said she needed time to grow
    But really meant she simply had outgrown me.
    Ma is listning as always, been there for me on all days
    Takin on the burdens of me, when her load is already heavy
    So tired, she really needed tranquility, a long vacation with a lot of serenity
    And in all reality, a break. She has been the rock providing years of stabilty
    She is dealing with enough
    Pops...I dont even kno he is, aint seen him since I was kid
    Did he ever rock my crib? Who cares...to me, he dont even exsist
    Only Christ exsist, Chrst stuck by me, Christ never fell outta love wit me
    Christ never ridiculed me, Christ comforted me, Christ gave me hope,
    Christ's word let me kno, the storm would not last long
    Christ said the battle was not my own, Christ told me I wasnt alone
    See within Christ I am strong, and without him I am weak
    Everything Christ is me. A woman of Christ I did meet and saw a huge
    difference. Friends of Christ I did greet and for the first time felt true fellowship.
    Everything in the past has led me to the this point. The pain, the hurt, the joy,
    the love, the heartbreak, the disappointment, the excitement, the death, the birth
    .....its all led me here....straight to Christ. Took me long enough, but sure enough
    here I stand. You cant understand?...you just dont know how deep it is.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeper then deep ....great write poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To be so low that you can barely pick yourself up, then to find that which takes you to a higher plane... Yes, poet, that is fathoms deep.
     
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