Black Poetry : How Could You Leave Me??...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another song....its about the death of my first love...enjoy



    Verse 1:

    i'm walkin' down a long road
    filled with worry
    filled with trials and tribulations
    on that road i found you
    you took me in and gave me unconditional love
    i received it, but i didn't return it
    you were hurt
    then i realized you were all that i had
    all that i loved
    and as soon as i realized that you were the one
    you were gone


    Chorus:

    so how could you?
    you leave me
    and how could you?
    you leave me all alone
    and how could you just go when you knew i needed your love?
    and how could you leave your lingering kiss on my face?
    and just go away
    your love just floated away


    Verse 2:

    i remember everything about you
    your smile
    your warmth
    your kiss
    i was warned that you'd be gone
    once again i received your love
    but i didn't return it
    i should have realized the signs
    but i looked straight past them
    and then i woke up and i was told that you were gone

    (Chorus again)


    Hook:

    i can make it through
    i'll do it just for you baby
    and now that i realize that your love was truly real
    i'm lookin' and around
    and you'll never be found
    i can't believe you'd go and leave me forever
    forever...

    so how could you?
    you leave me..............(and it goes back to the chorus)
     
  2. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoying your songs and flows Lovely!
    Peace.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot skrybe:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte as alwaysss! let da pen flow sis.
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwww so sweet rich:)
     
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    Man!!!! the songs that come from the :heart: are usually the best ones.......like this one! :)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks girl!:)
     
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    that brought tears to my eyes! It was so sad and beautiful!
    Heartfelt! Dont forget me when that lable drops! I want the first CD with your autograph on it!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwww i didn't mean to bring tears to your eyes...:( anyway thanks for the compliments girl!!! and i could never forget you:)....and u'll get a CD:)
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH YES!!!

    My sweetie drops da knowledge ONCE AGAIN!!!

    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:


    I loved this song....

    I know I can relate....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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