Black Poetry : How come

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  1. choclatefantasy

    choclatefantasy Member MEMBER

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    How come when I see you
    I feel so blue
    How come after all this time
    I can't get over you

    How come when I look at you
    You look with such disgust
    How come when you look at me
    My eyes feel w/ lust

    How come when I think of you
    I want to break down and cry
    How come when you ignore me
    I want to die

    How come when you're with another girl
    I immediately don't like her
    How come every memory of you
    Is not a blur

    How come I always care what you think
    W/ everything I do
    How come every vision I have
    I want it o be w/ you

    How come the way I feel
    You don't feel the same
    How come the way you feel for me
    I feel I am to blame
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel your pain...nice poem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the depth of feeling is yet unknown
    and the many question arise why
    yet unsong the emotions here is felt still.