Black Poetry : HOW CAN YOU COMPLAIN?

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOW CAN YOU COMPLAIN?


    “Hey girl, How come my baby don’t remember me?”
    Because after you left, He started calling me mommy and daddy

    “Hey girl, how come my baby don’t respect me”?
    Because you never grew up,
    Immature without responsibility

    “Hey girl, I’m her daddy,! That nig**** can’t replace me”!
    But he has a job, he’s not slangin dope for a rap dream

    “Hey girl, why are you keeping my baby from me”?
    Because I carry the load while you continue to spread your seed

    “Hey girl, why do you have my baby in the streets”?
    Because we got evicted
    You forgot to mail a check to me

    “Hey girl, how come my baby is crying hungry”?
    Because you told Sean John she could wait another week

    “Hey girl, how come my baby is pregnant at 15”?
    Because she was looking for love ,when you left us for another family

    “Hey girl, How come my baby is doing life in the penitentiary”?
    Because he wanted to be where he knew you’d never leave

    “Look girl, I know I should have been a father to my kids
    But all I cared about was living my life for me back then
    My daddy left so I followed his lead
    If it weren’t for you,
    My baby would be a statistic to society
    Another vicious cycle,
    Of boys never becoming men
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Broken from start
    never learn da worth
    afraid to stand up
    to be that man
    had too many wild
    plans , often many
    get lost we have to
    change this trend of
    black men ......we need father's
    to be men and thy child guide .
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow a powerful write flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love rich and nevar!:blowkiss:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam sis
    Your creative juices are flowing
    Men just boys a cycle
    That will I hope end
    This was a great piece
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you brother Tantrum:kiss1:
     
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