Black Poetry : How can u not luv me ?

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How can u not love me
    when my love is abisk
    fulfilling with passion
    i've treasured ya heart
    i've felt da depth of ya
    humble soul and yo
    mental mind calling
    I so loveth u always
    even when it seem not

    Never can i not comfort u
    for inside my embrace a
    warm devotion is released
    i know u feel abandon
    and u taste bitter sweet
    but my passion for u is
    and my heart taps at love
    door

    Did u not hear me !

    I've open to the moments
    we share and mix our
    emotions like liquid ink
    as it dance cross canvas
    did u not know how i watch
    u dance & prance cross da
    room i see in your eyes on
    enternal contact a divine
    love

    did u not feel me !

    Magnificent faithfulness
    ya heart brings me
    loyality i offer u with my
    deepest compassion
    i take ya hand in honor
    and kiss u in da depth of
    upmost respect my Queeneth
    i so loveth u
    ya earthly brown beautiful
    silky lustful skin da coal black
    shinning hair and the majestic
    river of ya wordz dominant
    the moment as i think of u
    i'm amazingly satisfying in dis
    compassionate thought

    u so know i loveth u !
    and my pleasure of heart
    is in ya soul u hold deeply
    what i give u no man can give
    what i offer can't fine nowhere
    and what i speak of is real love
    as i ware ya spirit around me

    how can u not loveth me
    my humble Beloveth one . :?:

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    each verse speaks so loud and clear for whats inside
    have poured out....feel, hear, and see...this was emotional
    moving..... :luvv:

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da unconditional love moving freely today
    wit pen in hand mind in da air and soul aim high
    thankz sista Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know how one could not love another under these circumstances. Doesn't sound like it could be possible. How could it be? This was so emotively written.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz as da eyez see and ears hear
    thee love pouring outward to a divine warmth
    one so not loveth and turn will pass thy treasure
    thankz again sis.
     
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    One would hope that what eyes see and ears hear is what one truly sees through one's own eyes, and not through the eyes of others. Flow on with this, brotha.
     
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    this one popped up ..i readed it and had to respond on it....
    because the :heart: told me to..


    like i told you i have not readed from you much....
    but youre poetry goes sky,s somethimes...
    sumthimes i just dont choose to read it cause It most of the time cause it reminds you......youre still a woman longing , (i,m not the only one...)
    so i miss out some beautifull poetry and vibrations and love..


    how can we not love brother rich...
    you are verry loved......... :hearts4: serounded by destee fam..


    i do because you fly above us all poets and give us positive guidance and sending us love and support to our poetry...
    i do because you were one of those who understood some of me weird jockes
    and poems who i did considder as not poeticly good poetry but wich were treu emotional from my heart...

    i hope to chat with you one day in the Destee chat..



    asking to my friend or famaly ....

    ""did someone respond ?'' "'yeah "' "'one"'

    "'but he is a modorator "' "'its still one responding it could have been worse"



    thank you for that :flowers: and huge...





    I :heart: you
    and all fam Destee,s place..
    and just
    wish ...
    you good...














    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz

    wow! libertylady thank u sista i try to bring it correct i know
    i miss sometime but i try thankz a million
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes :heart: u...


    :heart: destee..


    :heart: :destee place Fam


    i ,m going to pray deep...
    that the poetry fam will grow well
    that all individuals will be happy..also outside the poetryhouse
    in their every need.love health,guidance..
    that they grow intensly closer to god..
    whom will give them all what their hearts disires as it will go together with the will of god...


    we might have to carry eachother on our way to sion one day..
    maybe maybe not...






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed sis ur on point what a blessing