Black Poetry : HOW CAN U HEAL?(IM ASKIN SOULZ)

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In many multiply wayz
    I wonda if getting hurt as many times that I've been hurt, was it worth it all?
    was it worth the lost confidence, the lost happyness of love that is now gone?
    I ask what have they done?
    this pain that lives inside of me
    it is more than what I intended
    yo this can't be recommended!
    this war of pain that im fighting
    yo i have fought this war alone
    even with such ache-n-bones!
    In many wayz,
    this pain made me feel like i didn't belong
    yo what waz wrong?
    such pain can make you wonda
    at times I felt like I wanted to kill the ones who caused this **** of anxiety
    but me wanting to kill was no sign of me keeping it real
    but such strong thoughts came to mind
    saying you don't have to appeal to this!
    you don't have to give in, but give out!
    but you know I had my doubts
    such permanet pain that I have
    it stays deep in my brain,which cauese me to picture rain
    man i wish i could get away from this in a train!
    but I have fallen so many dayum times to the point that there would be no thought of laughter to a person
    yea it was that serious!
    but do you know how hard it was to pick myself back up?
    its as if i have broken my leg and I am trying to walk on it without recovery
    this feeling makes me want to give up hope
    something that I once believe in
    but changes hasn't happen!
    well at least not yet, or did i forget?
    this is how i felt for the longest and God knows it!
    but i yet feel lost in the darkness
    yo its hard to get to the light
    yo that is what im seacrhing for, till God calls me home
    but my brathas and sistas just know for a fact that i will never give up
    yo thats a promise


    dedicated to the souls who are fighting the war in themselves
    (c) copywrite
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo sis keep up the good writes.
     
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    Relax, relate, release:)

    Flow on sis
     
  4. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u spicybrown and nevar, yall kno yall my soul sistahz

    blackluv and bp
     
  5. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya poet. flo on.
    One love
     
  6. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had tears in my eyes reading this!
    This describes how I have been feeling lately!
    Lost in pain and thought wanting to surrender unarmed,unprepared for the outcome of life's pleasures and pains!
    I truly enjoyed this from the heart!:love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u, im glad u enjoyed it

    blackluv and bp
     
  8. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u skrybble7 im glad u like it az well

    blackluv and bp
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are bringing much needed
    Flow from the ladies side for real
    I am straight feeling this
    Much Love Poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    being hurt often bring better ways
    i love the flava of ya pen flowing
    wow this was awesome.............
     
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