Black Poetry : HOW CAN I...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by showfer, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. showfer

    showfer Member MEMBER

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    HOW CAN I SHOW YOU,
    WHAT I SAY IS TRUE?
    HOW CAN I GET OVER,
    THE FEAR OF LOSING YOU?
    HOW CAN I TELL YOU,
    WHAT I'M TRYING TO EXPLAIN?
    HOW CAN I DO THIS,
    WITHOUT CAUSING ME PAIN?
    HOW CAN I GET MAD,
    AT SOMEONE SO SWEET?
    HOW CAN I REVEAL,
    SOMETHING THAT'S SO DEEP?
    HOW CAN I HOLD YOU,
    WHEN YOU WALK AWAY?
    HOW CAN I LEAVE,
    WHEN I'D RATHER STAY?
    HOW CAN I SEE YOU,
    WHEN WE ARE APART?
    HOW CAN I LISTEN TO MY MIND,
    WITHOUT BREAKING MY HEART?
    HOW CAN I ANSWER,
    WHEN YOU CALL OUT MY NAME?
    HOW CAN I CHANGE YOU,
    WHEN I WANT YOU THE SAME?
    HOW CAN I NOT TRUST YOU,
    WHEN I LOOK INTO YOUR EYES?
    HOW CAN I NOT GET JEALOUS,
    WHEN YOU TALK TO OTHER GUYS?
    HOW CAN I STAND STRONG,
    WHEN I FEEL YOUR TOUCH?
    HOW CAN I JUST TELL YOU,
    THAT I LOVE YOU SO MUCH?!
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes questions that have no answer are the most beautiful questions...much love to you for this piece, i loved it.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree..
    the questions are felted deep
    in this poem you have compse
    can't help but feel you
    on this
    Welcome to the family :wave:
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this alot!

    thanks for sharing this lovely peace
    & :wave: welcome to destee's


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to the family....
    nice drop
    likes the flow
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done i feel u on this scribe
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found here
    look to read more flow head
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Classic words...
    prompted by Love
    emotive flow!
    feeling it...