Black Poetry : House of Pain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Things on my mind. Keeping me turning in time. Bringing pain to the heart. Oh it's not that strong. Yet things do go wrong, and others misunderstand. This creates a house of pain. Don't take what I say. Check only my way, it's positive. I'm conscience of the game. Going in my brain. That causes me pain. I work out. Speaking about the things that take me out. Isn't the frame. It's my house of pain. Deep in my heart. Coming out of the dark. This house of pain. Each day I see better things for me. In this house of pain. I open the door and invite the rain. Into my house of pain. Let it pour, out over the floor. It's mine. Be there when it stops. I need your support and drops. To work my house of pain.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...

    I know this feeling... I really know this feeling. Nice flow.
     
  3. Khasm13

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    he who breaks da law must go to the house of pain...
    :lol:
    sorry i had to thro that movie snippet in :)
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    we all have a house of pain...i know i do
    this was tyte
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol @ khasm...
    but i like this and understand all to while
    the house of pain..
    nice write
     
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