Quiet Poetry Lounge : house music

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Aug 28, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    :yo: house music remember when I first touched you...
    your spirit and mines danced together,
    u massaged my heart I remember,
    stirred flames from the ashes and dying embers.
    I remember walking through your heart,
    amazed at the walls and floors...
    surprised and shocked by the many locked doors.

    I remember feeling our hearts syncopate in time,
    one beat was yours and the other mines.
    I knew I was getting lost in you,
    and much to my surprise,
    I was the captain of this flight,
    as we delighted in the ride.
    I remember our minds resting in the park,
    embracing after dark...
    while questioning our every question.
    Lost somewhere in time,
    lightly touching with a smile...
    finding common ground and joy
    in one anothers style.

    I knew there was a word for all of this,
    and it pained my lips to say,
    after all the changes I've gone through,
    light has finally shined my way.
    But the chambers of her heart were very secure,
    with an alarm and pitbulls standing at the door.
    For deep within hidden from all eyes,
    lies a treasure the world has tried to disguise.
    And yet she knows it's there...
    buried so far but so very near....
    under confusion, pain, doubts and fears.
    under issues that's been building for years.
    But I'll remember you as you will me,
    for in your lessons I've learned to be free.
    Free to be me, to simply be,
    and to remember your lessons eternally.
    Yes, I'll remember you as you will me,
    and the lessons of love that were meant to be.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop but know this the quiet peaceful forum where only 4 posts
    allowed within the week but we have the poetry get ya flow on forum up top
    do take time to read our poetic Etiquette rules here
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    do slow down so you don't seem to be flooding the forum
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  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop...your pen is all caught up nice lay..thanks for sharing!!!!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The first part of this piece brought me back to memories of house parties, the rest, was very romantic. I figured it was going to be a house party jam, I was pleasantly surprised.
     
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