Black Poetry : hourglass

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Aug 8, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Already!

    Hourglass

    When I seen you
    On the corner, way you shifted your gears
    I knew I had to have you in my coming years
    When I seen you girl
    I looked you up and down in swirl
    I knew you were a diamond, other women were pearls
    When I seen you miss
    Your lips shined and sparkled
    Interrogating me, your beauty I marveled
    When I see you baby
    I’m guilty, can I be locked up with you?
    Its just something about that lil thing you do
    When I seen you up close
    I just wanna grab you, emotions spilling
    On the floor, I touch you more so fulfilling
    When I see you looking
    Get butterflies
    Beautiful as the array of colors in a sunset sky
    When I see you, a genie
    A bottle of your scent
    I’m a car, won’t you to fix my dents?
    When I see you mysterious
    The sand to the beach
    A breeze from the funnel of you reaches me
    When I see you in amazement
    A maze to me, for there are so many ways
    Thoughts about you, your voice charms day to day
    When I see you…
    Yeah baby, my eyes remain glued
    Blow air of bliss into my innertube
    When I see you….

    When I see you….

    When….
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OoO ...this was a good one
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice work here ....tyte scribeeeeee!!!
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow had me all wrapped up, when I....read it!

    Nice flow!
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This had me from jump.
    real beautiful
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww...u writin bout me?!?! :) lol
    lovely :)
     
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