Black Poetry : hotter than July(feeling Heartbeat)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Jun 12, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmmmm

    your eyelids
    shield me from
    the heat of your
    gaze

    mmmmmm

    I kiss your lashes

    &
    we become
    tangled arms and
    legs and hands
    and fingers

    mmmmmmmm

    &
    a smile blossoms
    upon lips
    and hunger
    rises &
    lengthens &
    thickens

    &

    glistens....

    mmmmmmmm

    &

    silky strands
    of liquid love
    mark the trail
    that leads to

    mmmmmmmm

    &
    your eyes open
    to the
    rhythm created
    by this moment

    & the magic
    between our
    thighs


    mmmmmmmm

    &

    I lay back while you tan my hide


    alyce
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My ! :p
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

    hold up let me go get some ice :p
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very hot!
    glad i didn't read this yesterday!
    i would've exploded...
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  4. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uhmmm Alyce.....I don't think i'm gonna touch this one...at least not yet....
     
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    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uhnnnnnn!!!!!!

    feelin you feelin Heartbeat...

    feelin good about it....need me some **** shades and some ice!!!!

    you hot ms. alyce

    Bishop might not wanna touch this, but er uh...

    mojo
     
  6. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What did I tell you, girl?

    You just flow: uncontrollably, incessantly, admirably, and it is, just, amazing, Ms. Alyce. You know you, definitely, brought the heat with this one... :hot::jumping::hot::jumping:
    We're gonna have to stop drop and roll for this one...
    :uzi::roll:
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's getting kind of hott up in here!!!!:uzi: I need to go cool down.
     
  8. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce, sis....

    I have never accused you of giving TMI....and I ain't gonna start. hehehehe

    go'n and do dat thang!

    T
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HHHHHHHHeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyy Sustah A~

    :devil: You came wit it on this piece ~ It's definitely too hot for me to handle!

    Loved it susta-gurl!!


    One.
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce,

    iz this your way of making the summer official?????
    usually nice.....

    jh...
     
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