Black Poetry : Hotep Meri

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  1. decipherx1

    decipherx1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is a dark matter of mystic glow that surrounds your soul.
    And I penetrate it's illumination from light yrs afar.
    So exuberant and tender, manipulating the laws of physics;
    Because when we throw down making love,
    My spirit never falls back to earth like gravity is suppose to.
    I am as a pulsar star, spinning brilliantly my passion for you.
    I walk beside you on the shores of the Euphrates and Nile and Ganges, in the midnight Black like Shivas hair, and Kalis skin.
    These sacred rivers are the cosmic clones, that transformed from other worlds in the cosmic nebula, long ago in hydrogen dawns of big bang benevolence, that bare the handy work of a higher power.
    As once there were rivers on mars, but now they lie frozen beneath crimson lunar dust, only to await your kiss to be reanimated to sustain life and regenerate the chance of life on another planet colonizing, a new species to reign under the milkyway
    You serenade my conscious, w/ sacred rhythms that only Sirrus
    The dog star can hear, in the heat of the rising of the Nile,
    A hot and heavy breathing cadence you cause me to perform.
    I conduct myself as a high on hashish dervish, swirling in circles,
    Ready to assassinate all that try to come between our love.
    Because I refuse to die a 1000 deaths, for I am no coward
    When it comes to loving you, emerged in your embryo of ecstasy eternally.

    Decipherx1
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    WHOODIE-HOO!


    The first line grabbed me and the rest wouldn't let me go!


    This made me think of the Maestro..."Ecstasy When You Lay Down Next To Me"
     
  3. decipherx1

    decipherx1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :SuN030: T.Y. hun Yeah I love Barry White also,
    may he R.I.P. Peace to you anf have a good day.
     
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    That's a mighty deep love, a mighty right love. I love the artistic way you layed this down poet :bowdown:
     
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    Very nicely done, poet.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    decipherx1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well T.Y. Queen, the Black women is my muse for creating ideas
    out of nothingness, and I bow to you also:)
     
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    decipherx1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well T.Y. so much, just trying to do the dang thing :qqb023:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    decipherx1:
    Im really diggn' the flow of your pen.
    Sounds like a spiritually passionate connection.
    Feeln' it for real

    Much Peace and Luv

    4Ever:heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    veryy nice flow poet:)
     
  10. decipherx1

    decipherx1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why thank you so much 4ever:)
    I try to keep it real w/ my feelings and exult the Black women,
    to higest level possible.
    Ya'll the Queens:)
     
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