Black Haiku : hot water

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  1. deepy

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    a stye on the eye
    stress and poisons seeping out
    let it burst with heat
     
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    Let the water boil
    Watch it turn into a steam
    Erupting that stress
     
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    the eye is clearer
    hot water drew me nearer
    cleansing away tears
     
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    Clearly seeing how
    Sometimes heat can be helpful
    To put out the flame
     
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    the eye is cooler
    the poison lifted by heat
    the hot steam brings tears
     
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    clearly composed in
    da coolness and steamy wave
    tears soon to dry up
     
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    stye gone tears dry up
    hot compresses and quiet
    removed the stresses
     
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    indeed forth stressness
    is only the burden laid
    we fine peace within
     
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    My stress is removed
    And I now have peace of mind
    Taken by pure steam
    That seemed to be my lifeline
     
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    In GOD i put trust
    ashame let me never be
    stye gone..i am free
     
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