Black Poetry : Hot Sleep

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, May 6, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    skribblin
    wurks on my notepad
    keyed
    i ran thru some pals
    passed to me
    one of my patnas
    n me
    had a bizness fall
    out
    we was like family
    similar
    me circlin a lil
    closer to the edge of
    calamity
    walkin
    hard walk
    hot skips round
    chalk
    to get
    blunts and rice
    china house route

    wid my eyes tite
    i seen a fire fight
    my phalanges
    equipped
    with semi automatic
    and automatic
    projectile
    spitting objects
    awww mann
    the receivers
    on the other end
    look too much like
    me
    but they attackin
    my man
    he get shot
    oh no my
    rippup
    sweet burst
    stripped the mon
    out he tshirt
    oh no
    now i'm in deep
    is this really
    how i sleep?
    my man
    limpin away
    the rest the crew
    is gone
    fo' mo shots
    from my left hand
    an i step
    n to the YMCA
    my attackers
    closer on my heels
    than my lips to
    breath
    conceal my weapons
    slip into the crowd
    head for the basketball
    court
    my man holdin his shirt
    callin his first
    they bussin up a game
    i turn see the maine
    again
    fuugetit
    i grab a ball
    play my spot by the wall
    takin shots
    when the fellas run up
    court
    dunkin when i get the feelin
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grin: Nice drop,Im likesssss
     
  3. PurpleMoons

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    Wow!
    Had me walking
    right beside ya!
    Tyte drop!
     
  4. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grin:
    mann
    ya'll shoulda seen
    that lass dunk i took

    :uzi:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    wow tight drop
    i was in this one...
    flow on....
    :heart: Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da heat is on RED hot sleep !!
    sweet drop lovin dis one
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: oooooh they shootin'
    them words is hittin me hard man muuuuuch props on this junt light it up:wave:
     
  8. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mann, whuud uup?!

    :thanks: :bazooka: :uzi: :uzi:
    :smokin: >>only d.originoo.gunklappas<<
     
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    Nice word play in this one, keep the flows rolling.
     
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