Black Poetry : Hot Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, May 9, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot rain
    Your man’s sweet love
    Hot rain comes down in you
    Unlike rain from above

    Hot rain on fire
    Spreading all through you
    Hot rain the result
    Of what he does to you

    Every spot it will cover
    Hot rain coming down
    From the hardness of your lover

    Close your sweet doors tight
    Shut out the draft
    Feel the hot rain come down his shaft

    Hot rain, hot rain
    Feeling so **** good
    Hot rain, hot inside
    Hot rain touching places without a guide

    Hot rain coming in loving spurts
    Hot rain makes him look like something hurts
    Hot rain exploding all up in you
    Hot rain keeps raining when the rain is through

    BE
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Whew !!!!!

    Well Well Well Heartbeat !!!!

    Whew !!!! yeah ... give us that rain !!!

    make our flowers grow ...

    i love it !!!

    Soooooo glad you made it back home!!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HB

    got me sweatin up in hea!!!:hot:

    flamin hot bwoy!!
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE....

    ....ummm.... Hot Rain, huh? well it was definitely... HOT AS HELL!

    Peace.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    SHO YOU RIGHT!


    alyce

    :kiss:
     
  6. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot Piece!!!!

    And it sho is hot in hea. Girl let it rain... let it rain... LET IT RAIN!!!
     
  7. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ****....

    P

    :D


    SWT
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have you ever thought about a job as a weather forecaster...
    makes me wanna play in the rain all day long....

    K
     
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