Black Poetry : Hot Grease * Grits

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  1. blacmajic

    blacmajic Active Member MEMBER

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    Hot Grease & Grits


    Dedicated to physically abused women:

    As I stand here in the mirror and look at my bruised face
    My blood begins to boil as I think of you catching a case

    Told me it was all my fault
    I was the one to blame
    Feelings of depression…. As I hold my head in shame

    Had me believing everything would be fine
    As long as I stayed in my place and kept in line

    Beaten, battered, broken ribs
    Cussing, screaming, tearing up the crib

    Gonna hit me… Just because I don’t do things the way you want them to be done
    I can’t take this no more…
    I am not the one

    Wondering why you hurt me as I sit here and cry
    Messed me up so bad…. Sometimes I felt like I’d rather die

    But I realize my life is too precious
    Watching you act a fool….Going through a jealous rage
    Got me cooped up like some animal in a cage

    Living a lifetime of scars and wounds
    Oh your day is coming…. And it’s coming soon

    Yes I’m crazy
    And I’m about to go thin line….
    Cause this is the last time I’m gonna let you wup my behind

    I’m not about to stay here and rationalize….
    Why you busted my lip…. And gave me a black eye

    Fear is what made me stay with you
    Love is what made me stay true

    Cause a good woman wouldn’t give up on her man
    I’ve tried that, but I can no longer understand

    How can you slap me, kick me, push me, and shove me
    Then hold me so gently and tell me you love me

    I’m not about to sit here and stay
    And let you beat on me day after day

    I’m tired…. And I ain’t taking no more
    It’s over….
    I’m through…. And I am out the door

    Mind going through such a rage…. I thought I was gonna kill
    You put me through a lot of pain, but I had to chill

    So I played it cool….
    Let you think I was gonna abide by your rules

    That night when I laid my head down to dream
    I was thinking of a way to get even….A vengeful scheme

    The next morning you told me to fix you something to eat
    At this moment I started my plan of defeat

    As I began making your grits, bacon, and eggs….
    This thought just quickly popped into my head

    Hot grease and grits sounds tempting
    It’ll stick to you….And don’t worry….
    I’ll make sure the pot is emptied

    Breakfast in bed
    A special delivery for my man
    You didn’t like it and began to raise your hand….

    But I came prepared with some hot grease and grits on the side
    As you began to strike me….I threw it all over your bare hide

    Giving service with a smile
    And every minute was worth the while

    This is on behalf of every woman you have ever hit
    And I hope you like the taste of my hot grease and grits

    © 2000 Blacmajic. All rights reserved.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TO MY GIRL THIS WAS BAD!!!
     
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    blacmajic Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Girl :) I've never been in an abusive relationship, but I know people who have. I thought about how I would react if I were abused and pushed to the edge. That's how I created the poem.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee's poetic playground
    u came wit heat from da stove
    stickyyyyy!!!

    unto u i felt this reality check
    a man whom hit a Queen not a man just myth !
    flow on :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    :thanks: for such a warm welcome Rich.
     
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    most welcome sista Queen
     
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    grease on the beast face
    back and body
    sizzling sections sticking
    itching
    to get off
    the beast face
    back and body
    wet him up in pain
    like a shottie
    blast
    how long can a demon
    last
    amongst angels
    with golden glowing halos
    not long i thinks not
    hells hot
    and so is this grease
    that feasts
    on my daily sin
    so that it's not forgoten

    peace
    khasm
     
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    blacmajic Active Member MEMBER

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    Yo Khasm, Yours is more fire than mine. You just straight went and heated up some Crisco and threw it on the devil. Now how hot is that? LOL!!!!
     
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    thank you Cindy:)
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    lol,believe me...your is definately hotta, i just had to get in on some of that heat...welcome to the fam
    peace
    khasm
     
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