Black Poetry : HOT "DAISY"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Young tender confused
    but she play wit nothing to lose
    she was a party gurl
    had this funky nassy swirl
    lustful sexy lips, a dimple smile
    fancy loose from her hips
    when she dance men dip
    what is this ain't it a 'Blip"

    she was a act to see
    when she wiggle,twist & flip
    lil Daisy was really a trip
    working the floor smokin grip
    like it's a grand money strip
    til one night at the club
    she met this cat
    a baller name (Bud)
    cool as can be
    he was something really to see
    dressed in his ruby red
    adam shoes, brim to da head
    whisper three words
    little did she know she was
    about to be had

    Daisy softly easy to his side
    licked her lips and said !
    U wanna ride
    he flip his stack pat her backside
    ummmm! let me be yo guide
    work me gurl like u work da flo
    break me off som'em down to
    da naked core
    being set up by this cat
    about to make her his new
    chocolate whore!

    so young didn't see it coming
    Daisy suprise pt.2 Next .......

    Nu`~ wave Creation
    Dyamond 2005 Production
    $R
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot daisy indeed...you really know how to do a poetic tale cant wait for pt2 the creative enegry in this I likes da...flow on Angel
     
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    thankz sis...... just a wild side of the pen u know
    stay tune ...
     
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    Ok.

    Now i am waiting for pt2, i was really into that. :welldone: :D :D :D :D :D :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book: :book:
     
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    thankz a million sista for the visit & love
    stay tune ,,,
     
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    Red hot like a fire wall lil Daisy pt.2 will tell it all
    thankz everyone for sharing inside my strip and support.
    peace
    $R
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    daisy ...hotter than the little flower..
    waiting for you to bring the second part
    to this tower..
    thanks rich
     
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    much love sista deepy thank u for the lovin support
     
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    Seems like Daisy is more fragile than she realizes, living life too fast for her own good. I'm looking forward to part 2 myself...please keep that pen moving brotha.
     
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    thankz the pen ink runs free and Daisy well in pt.2 we'll see
    smh @ Daisy .....big ups sista watz for the support and love
     
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