Black Poetry : HOT DAISY pt.II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Bud all tight butter smooth
    Daisy still flat about to be ruled
    wiggling giving all she got
    Bud stood in ovational "clap"
    wrap his handz around her waist
    softly said let's leave this place
    sista gurl dancing and prancing
    flashing the gems didn't know
    Bud about to sell her trim

    Daisy flossin mini skirt and drop top
    moving round making it hot
    just cross the room was i old coon
    smiling and look crazy wondering about
    nassy lil Daisy
    Bud set ready to get paid
    whisper in her ear tyme u work it dear
    take him into another gear
    worry not have no fear let his pocket ring
    bring me back all his green
    she stop looked in suprise wit a shinning
    tear in her eyez , said O' my my my not I
    she so shocked on the spot Bud said go
    let it rock gurl u my new dip i'm ya pimp
    remember we sealed it wit a kiss see
    Daisy you hot freaky and free
    why not work for me i'll protect u keep
    u safe but in here is not the place !
    i'll dress u nice and love u too
    so gurl what u gonna do !

    all fuzzy and scared locked up wit
    a brutha who don't care looking around
    the room didn't know what to do
    and the old coon waiting to get some
    of lil helpless Daisy , ummm! just maybe
    but she spot this guy he was looking fly
    she smirk as he wink his eye
    raised his glass up in da sky
    he was a lover a caring brutha
    about to blow Buds sorry cover
    deep in sweat daisy all wet can't really
    feel this cat so she said i'll be right back !!!
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    :thinking:

    (Pt.3)_ the battle of pimp & lover
    two tyte bruthas for daisy treasure

    Nu ~ wave ~ Creation ~
    Dyamond 2005 Production
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daisy freely shook her treasure of gold, not thinking Bud was planning on having her assets sold. You put us right in the middle of this, and seems like Daisy knows how to smell a rat. Keep us posted, we'll keep reading brotha.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well brother you keep thinking on this piece and finish it. So I can see final scene to this movie.

    peace
     
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    you know watz sometime it have to slap one in the face to see
    worth or unworthy but Daisy might wiggle out or go down another
    Hooker to young to understand her values but this love hummm!!!
    Thankz sista for the visit and read of Daisy.


    Blakverb .....man the show must go on and the curtains coming down fo sho
    thankz brutha for the love and read of Hot Daisy stay tune for pt.3
     
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    oh this is good what a wild n its truth within this mix cant wait for part 3

    Angel
     
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    sho nuff as pt.3 will be the tense moment will she be taken under
    mackertearing or caught by the lover's eye ! wheewww Daisy
    Thankz Angel for the supporting love and read of daisy drama .....
     
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    You such a good storyteller, baby. :terrific: Now cmon and give us some mo!
     
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    see now gempis u got me ova here blushing
    Thankz sis for the lovin support
     
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    Hmmmmm...

    Wonder what she'll do?
    Will she go 4 the love or be teased by the jewels?

    The plot thickens.
     
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    positiveMindset the drama is heavy for a younging !
    but the battle is on stay tune for pt.3
     
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