Quiet Poetry Lounge : HOT & COLD

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  1. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot & Cold


    Hot & Cold like water runnin out a facuet
    Individual streams manipulated daily.. ur never lukewarm
    One day u on my team next day ur not it seems
    Do I have the wrong handle on our relationship or are u just confused?
    As to what temperature u wanna choose...
    When I'm hot I'm hot... but sometimes u supress my heat by your lack of communication
    What am I to u?
    I used to know but at times I feel a grey area... u must have turned on the cold water
    U got me in that lukewarm position which is not my mission
    Being convenient fo u is not my aim... make yo mind up as to where u wanna go
    Cause quite honestly.. u not my only ho3.. but I choose to focus on u
    Now I'm re-evaluating what it was that I saw in you.... other then your body
    Or maybe its in reverse and my hot & cold fluctuation in giving u attention made u turn on them cold jets
    It ain't over.. I ain't bout to fold yet.. but is what we feel when its hot real?
    What do u want outta me?
    I used to kno but now u playin that game of hot & cold
    Never again will I get burnt by the heat of a false love
    And never will I freeze under conditions where potential heat could exist..
    Am I your secret wish?
    I kno I am but girl got dayum...
    U playin a game of hot & cold
    The ball is still in my control but I need a teamate to dish off to
    One thats on the same page... but u steady fluctuating up n down on this hot & cold gauge
    Is it forthright I am and timid u are?
    Or are u really not worth my time investment and u were once that itch to love but now u turned into a scar
    Lukewarm is not an option.. make it known to me what ur about
    Cause u sending mixed signals again.. something in the past I fell for..
    And got burnt by the heat of a false love
    Now I'm seeing flashes of De Ja Vu.. is the right thing really me and u?
    I've grown mentally over the years but its obviously not me... at confessing my feelings I've pretty much stayed the same
    U playing hot & cold... girl what the hell is goin on in yo brain?
    In reality.. I can do much better
    These ties of a false love may just have to sever and friends we will remain and not progress to more...
    I might just hit that cause thas all u worth... u kno, momentarialy gettin lost in them juices
    As for my next attempt at finding a partner... lets just say she'll have a broken jaccuzzi where hot water is all that her faucet produces
    Because I'm lava.....

    Feel me.

    :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:


    -lowkey
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feel you indeed poet. Hot cold, hot, cold, make up your **** mind....It's enough to drive even someone with the patience of Job insane. I hear ya, this was posed directly on target.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    really like da dip of this mixture here flow on
     
  4. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u brothas n sisters
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, I been in a relationship like this, and it was just like what you wrote. Nice drop.
     
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    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankx brotha..appreciate it

    Good that someone else can understand where I'm comin from.



    -lowkey
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's easy to feel where you're comming from "loud and clear"...and to the point. Your timing is right, ...in or out, do or don't, yes or no.
    I like your style..."If it don't fit...don't force it" Write on poet I hear all that you're saying.
     
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    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    hot bubble lava rocks

    this was hot 7 up..cold duck...one fish blue fish u fish new fish..nick nack patty jack..give patty la bell a cellphone,cause she aint home to read this flow,,,,....hookup.. :skate: :number1:
     
  9. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo kay



    lol ??????? :hulk: :hulk: :juggle:
     
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