Black Poetry : Hot and Bothered

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 25, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most brothers don't,
    neglect to,
    don't want to understand that
    to play foreplay you must
    start before you
    become "in the presence"
    of the one that is too receive
    romance...it really ain't about
    finance...money can't make her feel
    good, it's the verbal dance that
    pirohuettes her on an axis
    of anxiousness for your arrival

    the anxiousness that causes hearts to
    jump windows to be peeped through
    and sweat beads to form when a car
    door is slammed the anxiousness that gets
    her HOT AND BOTHERED well before you
    get there / the anxiousness that creates wet
    sheets before you reach it / the anxiousness
    that creates rivers to run down goosebumped
    thighs and the tides are held back until
    you arrive....

    RINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!

    She: Hello
    Me: Hey love
    She: Did you place rose petals in my underwear drawer? My bathtub? Under my pillow?
    Me: What more do you want? Petals placed on your
    naked body so I can search for your secret place where
    stars spin in space?
    Me: Have I told you what you did to me today?
    She: No (Smiling)
    Me: Well....

    This day has gone by too slow
    I've been pacified by this thought
    of you accepting my touch and
    arching your back so I can pass my
    fingertips up and
    D
    O
    W
    N
    the mid of your temple / and breathing in
    deeply with an offspring of an orgasmic moan
    in Whisper tone when I get to the top
    of your back door and glide my finger
    upon the fold where two cheeks meet
    and say "ahhhhhhhh...."
    This day has gone by too slow
    sitting in meetings but my mind
    I found on the tops of poplar trees
    holding us as we made love in a
    midday breeze and seized the moment
    to hitch a ride on a cloud as it passed by
    This day has gone by too slow
    walking bent over cause my mind
    is erect and all I've done is think of
    you upon me and me....screaming
    your name in silence and crying for
    you when I'm through..all I want to do
    is "need" you

    She: O...................kay :)

    Me: See you soon. One more thing how many flavors can I
    taste you when I get there? How many fruits can I bring?

    She: ohhhhh.....shyyyyyt....I'll be...

    phone drops

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my!

    This is what I'm talkin bout! And to quote another Poet wise to the ways of passion:

    "...the time before the time of love is key..."

    So glad you put it down in words for all to clearly see...

    this is important schitt Blak!

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SOUND LIKE ME AND BIG JACKIE

    [email protected]:lol:
    ONLY THANG SHE WANNA HAVE HER MILKYWAY
    IN MY FACE .........DAYUMMMM!!.......O' WELL
    HERE WE GO AGAIN...........MAN DES BE TYGHT
    I FEEL YA AND I KNOW!:D
     
  4. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See this right here is why women be droppin their draws after Church!!!!

    The pastor has barely shook their hand and their panties be tucked inside their purse....cell phone bills be unpaid...but still they be trying to get friendly wit the operator...asking the 4-1-1 girl to cut them a deal-io...cos they gotta go see about buying a vowel...and get wit the Man-Of-Action....that calls himself 'Verb'

    And all I have to say is....

    *Amen*

    Cos' that schitt u just done scribed is tight panties!!!!!!!

    Dayuuuum U Blowin' Reefer On The Page Today!!!!!!!!!


    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter,

    My Canadian Queen...thanks, "...droppin' thier draws after church" now that's heavy! :D

    blak
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ - you know how it has to be done....the right way! You know I appreciate the comps mos' def'

    blak
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce, I try queen I try. Thank you much

    blak
     
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    ummm blak!!!

    Now that's what I call foreplay!!!!

    don't make me get the next flight outta here!...:angel1:
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak U Wild Fella!!!!!

    NOW WHY YOU DONE GON N GOT A BROTHA SEARCHIN' IN DA DAYTIME WIT A FLASHLIGHT FOR SOME FOREPLAY LIKE DIS RIGHT CHERE???!!!!

    Peace Man Peace!
    GQ
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    blakverb

    true playa mack style
    i like that

    Peace

    from Da Streets

    <DSSNY
     
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