Black Poetry : Horizon

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Sep 9, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She sat there on the balcony...
    watching over her temporary Property,
    rubbing her belly looking at the sun...
    preparing for her destiny..

    her rising Son......

    The moment was there and she deliverd
    him with a triumphal Arch..,
    chief ,prime ,senior ,within the third wave
    she scored ,and put him in the Public..
    She looked trough the mushy ,slimy,
    skin and blindly kissed his flesh ...
    his soul...,took a final exam and considered
    him as her own little miracle ..
    as she watched....

    her rising Son......

    She raised him with wisdom that would
    free him from the Slave Shackles...
    She feeded him strong,nurtured him
    and gave him love in the purest form.
    The little one between her bosoms ,
    became her bosom-friend..
    and he became a man...
    Chocolate Black brother...
    like a bar of hazelnut...,
    he now and then pops out his nutsness..
    with his sillyness ..
    and turned her eyes hazy..
    and she laughs..
    as she watches...

    her rising Son

    Years go by...
    and one Night ..
    he sits there ..
    next to her bed..
    blindly he kisses her goodbye...
    on her old beautifull crumpled skin...
    rubbes his tears in her face...
    and swollows.....
    is Proud of what she has Done..

    The next morning ...
    he sits there on the balcony..
    quiet...
    with a little smile on ...
    facing the dawn...
    a warm glow comes in to
    his heart....
    as he watched...

    Her Rising Sun.......
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this is a masterpiece...
    because of the internal emotions
    this piece
    released...whoa...
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. dnommo

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    wow...this one is one i shall keep as an iriginal of true emotions. ou have allowed such feelings to be absorbed into the richness of the ink and then released it upon the world for all to see...

    i am honored just to read such a poem...

    one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was beautiful and the essence of warmth captured
    very tyte scribe poetess
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks brothers...




    Love L
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo my sista I was like :eeek: because you swept me away in the anticipation of this lovin emotion :)
    I LOVED this read :)
    yo go gurrrl :)
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sister trinity...:smile:




    Love L
     
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    i like
    nice flow
    it was tight...
    sort of speechless...
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you sweet angel...
    Pantaxx ....making me :blush: thank you..
    i tried to come in the chat but it didnt work a few times..

    but dont worry ....i wil reunite again with you all....:grouphuge:

    much love liberty..
     
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    Very Beautiful...God Bless
     
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