Black Poetry : horizon queen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Oct 4, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She stirs from her slumber
    …standing at the dawn of
    Tomorrow’s age

    She watches over the grassy meadows
    As she walks along her way
    …ushering in the newness
    of, yet, another day

    She touch the flowers
    And makes them bloom

    How precious is her touch?

    The way of the world
    Goes according to her mood

    Eloquent…or, crude

    Happiness
    Brings forth pleasant days
    Of gentle smiles and
    Romantic foreplay

    Moodiness
    Brings with it
    Overcast skies
    To fill the gloomy days
    As her gaze
    Is locked away
    From all

    She warms the coldest heart
    And brightens the darkest hour

    Her might was bestowed upon her
    By the Almighty One
    Since the dawn of man’s time
    She has stood

    Watching

    Good morning, sunshine.
     
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    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the "nature" of this poem...

    beautiful.

    ~Shani
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving the natural feel of these words...

    for me it held a double meaning...beautiful imagery....

    K
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller

    this is wonderful and very eloquent...




    One
     
  5. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cerebrally appreciated...

    and brilliantly scribed. Thank you.
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must agree with the greater ones before
    this is awsome
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really incredible imagery, simile, and vision.
     
  8. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    serene... are you. & i am diggin' it deep.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Baller i feel da bliss of love flowin in dis piece !!!
     
  10. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    her MAJESTY shines high.

    THANKS for reading me.:)
     
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